Teethmarks and Wolf Pelts - Comments

From Comment Swap//I really, actually enjoy the story so far (I'm at chapter 4). The introduction of characters is smooth and natural, as are the descriptions of them. A lot of wolf-stories give out really weird, hyper white-masculine names to their protags, but I like the names you settled with here. Including the name of your heroine! Priss is lovely.

I like your grammar and pacing, and I might end up reading the whole thing of my own free will!

This is really well done in terms of character development. Team Felix. A few grammatical issues that are more preference than actual errors. Nothing an editor won't fix! I don't mind the Twilight vibes either.

Team Felix he sounds pretty cute

I really like the idea of this. I was brought here by comment swap. I'm not usually into these types of stories, but this one was a lot better. I like the way you describe everything that's happening. I hate having to imagine everything that's going on in the story with very little detail given to me, and this is the exact opposite. I'm given all the words and it paints a vivid picture.

I finished reading. I'm almost in tears because I love this so much!
I like the way the plot flowed. It was all very original, but with just the tiniest bit of cliche romance that I love, so I'm SO proud of you for that, I'm serious. I'm a huge fan of you right now, Jojo!
Anyway, there's so much I'd like to say, but I'm going to cut this off here because I've already subscribed to Let Sleeping Dogs Lie and I want to go read that now. :D <3

Chapter 18 now, and Felix and Priss irritate me because it's such an Edward-and-Bella situation with (much more) likeable characters. -le sigh-

I'm on Chapter 17 right now so when I finish I'll give you a better comment, but TEAM FELIX TEAM FELIX SCREW YOU LEWIS

(Felix is cute. Haha.)

My name is Connor, so I instantly felt special!

I noticed something strange, "three months, but yet you feel." - I think this should either be 'but' or 'yet' (leaning more towards 'yet') but not both.There was also a line that made me dislike the character of Priss a little bit, "so much beauty ruined by the angry expression upon my face."It makes her seem a bit vain.

Hope I've helped, love the story.

Thanks for suggesting this to me. I'm on chapter 3 and I love it so far. It's really good. :)

I like this so much! I haven't read a whole lot of stories like this, because they usually aren't my thing but your's just so good!

Hehe, you need to invest in an editor. Just little mistakes like letters being left off words. Or things like "Let me take me home."

Ha, magic spit? That's a new one on me, very creative. I had figured this would be a lame cliche type story, but you impress.
Hehe, coincidentally, I'm also writing a werewolf story, though it's probably not as good as yours.

I read this in my study hall and started crying. The person next to me got up and walked away. I can't decide I I'm crying cause I'm sad angry or excited....

Wonder the problem is. Can't wait for more :)

Here's what I just love it's creepy and just when I think I know whats going to happen something unexpected happens and keeps me at the edge of my seat! I love it!

I was so team Lewis but not if he's a creepy killer. I'm so sad that Conner died :'( Can't wait for more :)

So amazing! Cant wait for the next chapter

Glad everything went well with Lewis

That chapter was heartbreaking and beautifully written. The poem was beautiful.

NO! he loved her and she was too late. Waah! God I'm tearing up, this is sad. I need a moment to calm down
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Okay I think I'm good. Update soon
P.S. Excited for the sequel! (but still a little sad)