Teethmarks and Wolf Pelts - Comments

I am pleased, do go on.

I'm in love and wanting more! Seriously, you're talented. I hope Conner doesn't get Priss (did you give her full name and I missed it?) into too much trouble, but it's probably gonna happen anyway. This story is just not a cliche kind of type so I'm subscribing. Keep updating please : )

Update soon, and keep up the good work :)

First of all, I adore the layout and the picture is really great. It really sets a good mood for the story. You're a talented author and I very much enjoy the flow and the tone you use.

It all started the Saturday before school started again after summer vacation.

This is a good start, but the word 'started' is too repetitive. Easy fix: change one to 'began' or something! That'll totally fix it.

Also, when you write dialogue, it should be this way:

"I see it," he said.

Instead of:

"I see it." He said.

Comma instead of period, lower case instead of upper case.

Keep up the good work!

I haven't really read too many werewolf stories on here, but I like this one so far. I usually can't find any decent ones, and I'm so sick of the vampire ones I find :)