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  • samlo

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    I'm so scattere brained lately. For a second you gave me a heart attack. When I read about James and Zoe. And how Maeva and Kody were attacking Izzy wither nerf guns. I thought I was getting a glimpse into the future. Or like I missed a ton. I was thinking "What is going on? They have kids? How much did I miss and why wasn't I recieving the notification emails?" Then I remembered they were just babyssiting the Dupuis clan. lol.

    Loved the update. I'm so looking forward to the next. :)
    February 29th, 2012 at 11:02pm
  • Leslie.

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    I CANT DEAL WITH THIS OMG HFWUKDEK
    February 28th, 2012 at 03:22am
  • pineapple55

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    eeee they're getting closer!
    February 27th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Woah. That was a crazy chapter. I loved it! I also love that they're starting to really like each other.
    February 25th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • Vivian.

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    Oh my god. Favorite chapter of the story so far. Not only are Duper's kids adorable all on their own, but add in a Nerf gun fight with Izzy and Neal and ajkgfjdghjkhagjk. That's the only way I can describe it haha. AND YES. SOME SEXUAL TENSION. I think both of them are starting to see each other in a different light, and obviously scares the shit out of them. I can't wait for the next chapter! I have a feeling Jordan is going to start pursuing Izzy a little more and James is going to be like NO ME GUSTA.
    February 25th, 2012 at 09:19am
  • Cupcake1

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    Such a great chapter! Can't wait for more!!
    February 25th, 2012 at 08:13am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    That was an amazing update! I think babysitting should be a weekly thing for those two! SO adorable!
    Anyways, hopefully they have more moments like the one they shared on the couch! <3
    February 25th, 2012 at 07:00am
  • letterheadloyalty

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    CHILDREN! I think kids are always fun to use in a story since they will totally say anything.

    Poor Nealer. I feel so bad for him. Then I want to shake him... I just hope he wouldn't puke on me. ;)
    February 25th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • cognitive-dissonance

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    Bravo, bravo. Well-written (as always ) and the entire nerf gun fight was funny! I love nerf guns. Finally Izzy has realized that there are some feelings there, about time :p Ready for that next chaptah!
    February 25th, 2012 at 05:13am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I LOVED this chapter! But that's no surprise as I've loved every chapter so far. Can't wait for more! :)
    February 25th, 2012 at 05:01am
  • devilsfan302617

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    poor Nealer D: throwing up over a girl...
    this was a beautiful and fun update, please post again soon <3
    February 25th, 2012 at 03:18am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    So glad you updated.
    Aww poor James at the end.....
    February 25th, 2012 at 03:10am
  • soupy

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    been catching up with your story - I love the premise.

    I also love the idea of the crossover with Lux - that story was amazing!!!

    The tension between James and Izzy is so cute - and throw a bit of Staal in the mix, makes for an interesting read. Cant wait to see where this one goes.
    February 25th, 2012 at 03:06am
  • nessajc

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    Oooh. So close. But it wouldn't be half as entertaining if they kissed each other. They got to work their way to it.

    Damn that giant blonde! The man has got to get his mack on with another girl. He will not let up. Por que!!

    Update soon!!!
    February 25th, 2012 at 03:00am
  • PittPensFan5887

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    Wow, I was not expecting what happened in this chapter.
    I loved it anyways and it exceeded my expectations.
    You really do write some amazing chapters!
    I really want to see what it's going to be like at the game.
    I think the Staalsy and Nealer rivalry should start up a little bit and cause some drama since she likes him now.
    February 25th, 2012 at 02:57am
  • simplyayra

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    Each update is just leaving me waiting for more.
    February 25th, 2012 at 02:46am
  • samlo

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    Wow! I so suck at reading your updates on time. Life has just gotten in the way as of lately.

    I was thinking and was going to suggest, before I read this update, that I would love to see Lux make an appearance or two. But it's like you read my mind. :)

    I can't wait for more!
    February 19th, 2012 at 05:50pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved the update!
    February 19th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • PittPensFan5887

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    I love how you put in the reference to your previous story.
    That was a really good chapter after the long wait that you put me through.
    I was starting to get worried there a bit.
    I liked the update though. :)
    February 18th, 2012 at 12:50am
  • dreamerforever

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    You have no idea how happy I was to see you updated this! It was certainly a great ending to my day.
    February 17th, 2012 at 07:09am