So this story is pretty much perfection. I squealed when I got the email that you had updated. Can't wait for more! Dying to know how babysitting is going to go now that we know Nealers aversion to other people's children. LOL!
In other news... awesome update! Nealer sure is being a grumpy pants!
If you haven't heard it before you should check out Jamie Cullum's cover of the song. Awesome stuff if yhoure a fan of a slight jazz twist on things. :)
I see what you did there, sneaking in Lux like that. I definitely think you should somehow make her and Izzy meet later :) And let me just say, HOSTILE WORK ENVIRONMENT. Literally. James was being a poop head almost this entire chapter. I must say that I do enjoy how much Izzy gets under his skin though. It's entertaining to read about him silently raging haha.
When I read that I started flapping my arms like crazy. Eep. That's when he told her he loved her. Aaaah!!! I wouldn't mind Lux being there. :)
These two. Oh them. I love when I'm reading a story and the main two are all in denial and you just have to shake your head and be like, "oh if only you knew..."
Oh gosh the background info gets me more intrigued on her past, I mean I know you've been working about letting us know little by little. It's like a puzzle I love it. And him and this Cassy girl. Yeah I don't like her even if she's supposed to be from my home state. bleh. Ha for some reason I think of The Scene Aesthetic's The Alamo is No Place for Dancing.
Get Jordan a girl so he can stop trying to put the mack on. I'm sorry but she needs to be with another blue-eyed Canadian boy, and this one has dark hair. It just has to be.
I forgot to check how many chapters were posted before I began reading and when I reached the end of chapter 6, and saw it was the end of the road, I literally yelled out "Nooooo!", all loud and dramatic-like. (That is just an awfully put together sentence. I need to work on my construction but it's late and I'm tired. I do apologize though.) Basically, what I'm trying to get at is, update more? Soon? Please? Thanks.
Great job, by the way. It's lovely. Incredibly well written, the characters have so much depth, and it's unique and fun. I'm loving it. :)
Interesting to see Nealer's reaction to Staal hitting on Izzy. Like the plot twist with the whole more hanging out thing you know. This story is really developing well. :) Keep up the amazing work on this story.
Really enjoyed it! You may call it filler but I like the way the characters are coming together and we can see that in these moments. This was some of the best filler around. :)