In a Heartbeat - Comments

just found this story and seriously could not stop reading <3 I love the whole idea of it and your way of writing :) can't wait to see how things will go, if she have to marry matthew or if she and brian can have their happily ever after :D

You updated!! Yay!! I liked it and I hated it. But only cause I dislike Matt being all couply with her. And this comment is short but my love for you is not. More soon, please! xD

PLEASE keep writing!!! I have to know how this all unfolds!! It's so good!! The Royal boys think that Evangeline is wanting Matthew, but the Servant boys and Evangeline know that her heart's with Brian. OMG this is going to be so good!!

You have to keep writing! I just really love this and I need Brian and Evangeline together.

But I live that she's going to use Brian's one quarter royal blood to marry him, if it works. And I just really dislike Matt. He needs to just go away haha. Loved the update! :D

^I agree with Durch-Den-Monsun-87

YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING OR I'LL FALL INTO A DEPRESSION ABOUT NOT SEEING BRIAN AND EVANGELINE TOGETHER!!!!!! Please don't stop writing it.

Now onto thoughts of this chapter

YOU GET YOU SOME BRIAN! YEAH! TELL THAT CHICK WHO'S ONE QUARTER KING!!! -laughs at own joke- EW MATT WTF ARE YOU DOING? YOU JUST NEED TO LEAVE WITH YOURSELF! Ugh, my queen -gags-

Looooved the update though!

YOU MUST KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
BRIAN AND EVANGELINE MUST BE TOGETHER!!!!!
TOGETHER I SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so glad he's not giving up. :D I just freaking love him. ^.^ But he's royal blood?! :O What? How? I need to know! Update soon please! I loved the update!

-jaw drops- He...wha...uh...bu...you..........
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HUH?!

plz update, i hate these stupid cliff hangers!!!

loves,
Haley-Shae

:O he's what?!

*mouth hanging open*
HOLY MOTHER OF SHIT BRIAN'S ROAYL!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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DON'T LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!

AHHHHH I'm caught up now!! Ugh what the heck!! A week is not long enough to go through an entire kingdom's history!! I dont understand why she is so easily defeated. She has to fight for the guy she truly loves! And yeah, Matthew's hot and they would be great business partners, but that doesn't mean he's great husband material. Hahaha I love this story, its keeping me on the edge of my seat all the time now :) please keep the updates coming, you are such a talented writer

What? She's just going to give up? She can't! They're meant for each other! And now poor Brian's got his feelings hurt. :( Update soon please! :D

Grrr no no no no no no no no no no no no no! She is not supposed to be with Matthew! Not at all! But then, you do know where you're going with this better than I am xD

i loves!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just love the way you brought Johnny in. Absolutely brilliant making him a priest with Christ being his stage name. I liked how he was suggesting ways for her to be with Brian too. I hope she can find one. I love those two together. :D Loved the update!

love it!!!! :D please update again!!!

Johnathon ish Johnny Christ :3
annnd I want more of this soon. I want her and Brian to have midnight meetings and stolen kisses <3 I just want more so bad..

me likeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

OMG OMG OMG YESSSS!!! Yes yes yes yes!! Brian and Evangeline's secret affections for each other are heating up, and she detests Matthew! Not that i dont like Matt, but in this story, I dont like him. He's such a haughty, entitled, spioled Prince. But i cant blame it all on him, thats how Princes were raised. And Evangelines so cuuuute!! I really hope her and Brian find a way to stay together, while not sending her counrty into turmoil. Please update soon, because im officially addicted.