In a Heartbeat - Comments

i'm from the comment swap! i read the last chapter so obviously i was really confused haha but from what i can tell, this would have been an interesting read. it looks like you had a good handle on your characters and characterization in general. overall, i couldnt find any grammar or spelling mistakes and it was a nice chapter with a seemingly fitted ending. i hope you enjoyed writing this story!

That was such a sweet ending :)
I'm sad that it's over, but I'm so so glad that they finally managed to marry each other! And I loved how all the crowd was cheering for the two of them! This was just great.
Loved the whole story :)

Awwww ^,-^ happy day!!!! That was a BEAUTIFUL ending to the story. Gosh I love ALL your stories. And they actually got married!!! Please keep writing stories. Is there any you'll be postin soon?

AWWW i'm so glad it ended with them together! I'm so sad to see this end, but it was amazing!

Aw yay! ^.^ I'm glad they got to get married. I was scared for a minute that her father wouldn't change his mind. That and I was kind of scared Matthew would put up a fight before his father made him leave. Also loved when Evangeline slapped him and told him to rot in hell. He deserved that and so much more. It was great! Couldn't have had a better ending! :D

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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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MY HAPPINESS IS OVERWHELMING!!!!!!!!
i was literally biting my nails in anticipation of what was going to happen.

Yay!They're married,Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just started reading this and i love it!!!!Brian is such a sweetheart and Matt's an ass.I hope Brian gets to marry Eva :D Update soon :)

THE SUSPENSE!!! Woman. Urgh. You're killing me smalls. That was so good!! I'm glad Eva didn't fall for Matthew's BS. And so, so much more glad that the wedding is stopped, at leas for now. I wonder what the tyronian people have to say though!! Especially since they haven't attacked yet. GO BRIAN!!!!!

OMG!!!!
WHY. DID. YOU. END. IT. THERE!
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Curse my laptop for being broken and me having to use my touch for this!
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And throw the preists girl back in! Sorry. But seriously update before I hunt you down and kill you.

omg update update update. i dislike cliffhangers!!!!

There's so much to say! I'm glad Matthew and his father were caught for their assasination plans. Though I was scared that the king wouldn't believe Brian and possibly have him killed. I hate how Maat's father still demands for the wedding to go forth even though he's been outed for his plans. And Matthew. >< He complains about not wanting to go through with the wedding and yet he still tries to demand it happen anyway. I can't stand him. Though I'm curious as to what the Tyronian kingdom wants. They have something to say of importance because I doubt that they're there just to slaugter everyone. Update soon please!

Omg I got so nervous i thought Eva's father wasn't going to believe Brian! Matt is SLIM and so is his dad...Damn the Tyronians! oh no. Please update this soon!

Oh, my... the contract, the interruption, the Tyronian kingdom... and then you had to stop just like that???
I'm dying to know what's happening next!
I just can't stand the idea of Eva marrying Matt >.<
Please update soon!

Matts true colors are going to show

I read all 24 chapters in one day! i need to know what happens!

Oh, god, you had to stop like that!
And why is Brian nowhere to be seen!? I want to know where he is and why he's not on the ceremony.
I'm really curious about what's going to happen next! I hope everything goes as Evangeline planned, and that she can stay with who she really loves... I can't wait for the next update!! :D

HOW THE HELL CAN YOU END IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cliffhanger! D: I hate those things! But I really want to know what's going to happen. I kind of feel like her father pretty much used a ploy to ensure she married Matthew because he knew what she was planning. I hope she doesn't fall for it though. And I want to know where Brian is! He's probably planning something, but I don't know what. I don't think he knows anything that could ruin the wedding though. :/ The suspense is killing me! I want answers to everything. >< Great update though! :D