In a Heartbeat - Comments

Aksasdkkklhgdts! Squeak! Why you make Bri-bear leave????? The kiss though. It was just so sweet. I melted almost instantly <3 I must have more soon. And Yay! Another mention -huggles kind author- thank you! Now get ta updating!!!!

<<is having a ghetto panic attack at this chappie// Ho snap ho snap ho snap HO SNAP HO MAH GURR! Go Brian! Get some! xD

*le gasp* THEY KISSED! ...and then she made him leave :(
a new chapter is a must. and soon! :D

I'm so in love! ^.^ This chapter was perfect! And I squealed when they kissed! :D I couldn't help it. I so want them to be able to be together! Loved the update! And I'm super happy you're continuing it!

This is defenitly different from all the A7X stories I've read.
This one is so uniqe. I like the way you protray Brian. A soft, sweet and kind man who only wishes for the love of his life return his feelings. I give you 5 out of 5. I love the story line. I hope to see your next chapter up soon.

No! This chapter must be true. Taking it away from sweet, kind Brian is just wrong! I wish a thousand plagues unto whomever robbed that amazingly adorable man of happiness!!!!!! That being said, I love where the story is going. My heart raced alongside his as she took his hand. And when she asked him to her bed, it was all I could do to not scream. Please please update this soon. And make it stay amazing. Please.

Aw, I just fricking love Brian. He's so cute and adorable. ^.^ And I hope she does really feel the same way about him. Even if that means trouble for the both of them. Great job! Loved it! :D

Fyfuttdyvhvhtsyrydyijgcfzegarhdgjkhvi!!!! I want this as an update too!!! Holy cow its getting good! Except Matt who is totally pissing me off with his 'I am a prince!' And low outlook on slaves and stuff. But Brian is so adorable in this! More!!! More of the cuteness and the fancy and the James!!! And Jonathan and Zachary!! Gah! I just love you and your writing so much -cuddles computer-

I really really really love this! :D It's amazing, and I have yet to read anything like it. I can't wait to read more of it!

i love this story=D it is simply amazing

awesome story really like it
:)

I luuuurve this! It has the old-time romantic feel about it, and its really easy for me to picture whats going on. Im guessing that the gardener is Jimmy, correct me if im wrong though. Poor girl. I would hate to be forced into marriage. Bleh. But please keep writing this, it will easily become a favorite of mine im sure

Ahhh this is soo cute! I'm glad you told me 'bout it! I can't wait to find out moreee! xx

Intriguing to say the least. In all stories I've encountered, the women were held with honor but never before a man. I'm definitely curious as to where this will be going and hope you continue to leave me guessing like you do all other stories.

I love it so much :) I also really like the touch you put with the way they speak.

This was a great way to start, where we get a feel of both the guys. I hate stories where the guy doesn't come in until like the fifth chapter lol.

You should definitely keep going :)

dsfhjklgjfyjdthsgdh briboo!!
why you so cute!?

Yeah, this is awesome :)
Update soon!