The Rules of Life - Comments

seriously?

nuh-uh

I refuse to believe

'My locker wasn't empty.' - THAT SHOULD BE INVALID INFORMATION D:

....WTF.

I'm like



right now.
HE CAN'T DO THAT TO HER! D;

i love this so much

Motherfuckwhaaaaaatttt?
Matt can't have a friggin' girlfriend!!!!

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH OH MY GOD
THIS CHAPTER'S AMAZING K
omfg Matt was totally talking to me on the phone.
totally.
I think I've decided who my favourite character is.
It's Soe c:
everyone knows that he plays and INTEGRAL part of the story, if he isn't the main character.
so yeah.
update soon? ;D

Oh jeez. I wish everything would be okay for her. :P Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is honestly one of the best stories I've ever seen here on Mibba, by far. This story is a fine example of pure, beautiful talent.

Matt, you sonofabitch! >:O

Amazinngg keep goin!!!

...I just found this. Oh my god. This is great. I sincerely think this could be published. It's deep enough to be analyzed, but not so deep that it's over anyone's heads.
I love how you've layered everyone out. Keep it up. :)

I love this story!
The relationship between Sophia and Kinley is really nice.
And I'm totally in love with Travis. He's so cute and also very genuine.

OH MY GOD THIS UPDATE'S AMAZING.
IT'S SO FLAWLESS AND BEAUTIFUL
and I quite like Travis now. c;
just letting you know.
BUT DOES THAT MEAN HARDACKER'S ALL MINE OR
cause I really love Matt.
so yeah. please update soon (:

I can't even handle how good this story is. You've got a really nice way of writing going on, and I can't wait to read more!

Just caught up alskdjfalksd

You are wonderful and this story is wonderful.

I thought it was kind of weird though that Mr. H was all fine and dandy with Kinley cheating on Travis. Because that's what it was right? When they kissed, a few chapters ago. It wasn't even a thought in his mind, which kind of made him seem a little bit like a jerk to me. He also like, started planning how their relationship would work before Kinley said she wanted to be with him for sure. Obviously they kissed and she liked him and everything, but it was just like he expected her to go along with it and it didn't really give her much of a choice, not that she'd have turned him down. But you know what I mean. Hopefully.

This made me laugh:

“What, you didn’t think you’d keep it a secret forever, did you?” Forever? No. But maybe longer than a few minutes would have been nice.

And

There’s a reason guys think with their penises; sex organs are loud as fuck.

And also a million other little things, you magnificent ball of humor.

Also, we have a big problem here. A huuuuuuuge flaw in your writing. THIS IS TERRIBLE I'M TELLING YOU TERRRIBLEEEEEEE.

You have made me like Travis too much. I think I have developed some sort of crush on him? He's so cute and he likes Kinley so much omfg can I have him? Like can you make me a character in this and at the end be like, "Travis was happily married to a girl he met in college, Marianna, and they have erotic sex at least three times a day"? PLEASE?

ALSO I'M GLAD YOU USED THE COKE/PEPSI THING AKLSHJDKA
I KNEW IT WAS COMING AS SOON AS TRAVIS'S MOM OFFERED KINLEY SOMETHING ELSE TO DRINK. I JUST KNEW IT. AH, THE DISAPPOINTMENT OF PEPSI. IT'S OKAY, KINLEY. I WILL TAKE YOUR UNWANTED PEPSI. I WILL TAKE IT OFF YOUR HANDS AND THEN YOU CAN GO TO THE STORE AND GET SOME COKE. SOUND LIKE A PLAN? OKAY.

GOOD.

UPDATE.

ALSO I JUST THOUGHT OF SOMETHING CLEVER TO SAY, BUT IT'S PROBABLY NOT AS CLEVER AS IT REALLY WAS IN MY HEAD BUT THIS STORY IS DEFINITELY COKE, AND EVERY OTHER STORY EVER IS JUST PEPSI. DIET PEPSI, AT THAT. BUT YOU'RE COKE. DEFINITELY. OKAY.

UPDATE NOW.

you don't know...how bad...i feel for travis right now. ohmygod that is just so depressing. but this is a great story i love it

oh crap.
oh crap.
HOW CAN HE LOVE HER?!
GOD DAMMIT
wait
this is perfect
He loves her
she'll fall in love with him
AND I'LL HAVE MATT ALL TO MYSELF, YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. ;D
please update soon c:

Sorry, Travis, but you're not Matt! :P

you..haven't updated soon i'm so sad. This is literally my favorite story on mibba.

Can't wait for the next chapter :) I love Travis, he's so adorable. i loved that mckinley saw him being faithful