Nice! Loved the third chapter. Kinley sounds like a kick-ass girl, if I do say so myself. And Mr. Hardacker? I really want to see where you take him. Overall, wonderful update.
No lie, but after the first chapter I was saying "more, more, more!" This is a really interesting story, and I can't wait to see wear you go with it. Ding, ding, ding! You have one new subscriber haha. :)
Like, it's SOOOO not even funny how much I like this story. I've been looking for something like this, since everyone now is doing stories like rape and torture and "deep intense love" that I forgot what it was like to laugh at a few chapters. And this definitely made me laugh. I just hit the subscribe button, and I hope to be reading more of this story. :)
I really enjoyed that! I love the world Kinley lives in and I am very intrigued as to what is going to happen! next. One tiny detail: you say when she is at her locker, that the bell rings in two minutes. She then walks to her home room and you then say there are three minutes before the lesson begins. I was wondering if that was a mistake or if the bell is supposed to ring a couple of minutes before the lesson. Sorry, I have that kind of annoying mind! I really loved it, though! Please keep going! :)