Marilyn. - Comments

wait omg I reread this and I forgot you put me in this

Marilyn:
chapter 1. okay home gurl, you have a type LOL and it's quite specific
7. hahahah SHE IS BEING COCKY she's so unique and i love her and i think she's perfect for this story. and i love how she says she's not a home-wrecker but isn't a slut! she's amazing
13. MARILYN, THINK GIRL THINK. omg she's crazier than ever and i think everyone hates her but loves her at the same time and omg
19. she aint anything now. this gurl is cray and loosing everyone !
YES, GURL YOU ARE NOW A MESS, thank you for now realizing it (saying it as nice as possible!)
25. AHAHAH REALLY A LIST ?? ha okay
her list is very hilariouS! and it sounds like something marilyn would do/say
i love how she cleared up the lies and the said what was true!
glad that her son and her are happy c:
better be happy right?
i like that her life is better now, actually. she sounds less mean? HAHAHHA i can't think of another word
omg is Hanna really crazy??? omg Kingston is married :)
BENNY AND RAVEENA ;)))))
omg really dan. REALLY. YOU ARE CRAY and ew just ew BUT HIS ONE CRACKED ME UP THE MOST HAHAHAH
Hanna oh poor Hanna. Yes Marilyn, you drove her crazy
aww Mel ! :D

Kingston:
chapter 2. aww kingston, you think marilyn is cute?? ;))
SHE'S YOUR KIND OF GURL BUT YOU THOUGHT SHE WAS A SLUT? lololol
home boy, you gotta have her huh? wellllll.....
TWO CHAPTERS IN AND YOUR WRITING IS SO SMOOTH AND PERFECT you da bomb dot com
8. WHAT THEY DID WHAT???/ OMG dan's plan worked and omg i can't think right now :(((((
14. oo snap it hit fast during lunch! OF COURSE IT WOULD
20. HE'S OVER HER?? (yay??!?!)
aw they broke up?? i thought they were cute c:::

Hanna:
chapter 3. awwww hanna, why so perfect and sweet?
it takes a lot to be a people person bc i can be really impatient and irritated quickly haha
wait, benny and kingtson are together???
i must've not read kingston's chapter clearly
BUT THEY CUTE
ahhh
9. NO HANNA SWEETIE, I KNOW YOU ARE SAD BUT DAN IS NOT THE GUY FOR YA omg whhhy are you doing this to me?? ahhh
15. yeah i was surprised when Hanna started beating up Marilyn HAHAHA but she's pissed and i understand why.
DAN IS...BAD BOY
aww Marilyn has been taking away her guys since forever??? awww :((((((
Marilyn's been in the same since her younger years yo WHAT A BOSS
21. honey girl, she was your best friend but i guess she has the right to be angry at Marilyn. MARILYN WAS JUST OUT OF HAND YO
AHHHH HANNA AND BENNY??? :DDD

Benny:
chapter 4. WHY ARE ALL THESE BEAUTIFUL PPL NOT WITH THE PERSON THEY WANT
this is amazing and benny is so cute
it's a love-circle rather than that typical love triangle WHICH IS FRICKIN COOLIO AND I LOVE IT
10. "screamed like a bitch" HAHAHAH
SHE'S PREGGS??? OMG
idk if they should tell Hanna, she'll be more hurt :'((
16. oH MY G BENNY. LOL, YOU FIND THIS ALL FUNNY AND STUFF?/ bro whoa
22. ahhhh bby Benny :DDDD
WHAT HE DOESN'T LOVE HER OMG lol. this boy
she scared him???! HAHAHHA
everyone is relieved Marilyn left HAHAHAHH i find that sad but okay, i guess LOL

Melody:
chapter 5. MEL, YOU ARE MY SOUL MATE bc her "dont care, i'll tell you off" is so me. other than that, she kind of scares me LOL
what you want is what you get huh??? well, we'll see about that homie g
11. ahhh OH NO SHE DIDN'T WHHHHY WOULD YOU TELL HANNA, MEL???/ are you crazy??? omg this is not good
what is wrong with this chick yo>>>
17. HAHAHAHAH TYPICAL MELODY OVA HURrr
yes mel, everyone will judge you and that's just life
speak the truth gurl!
SHE RULED THE SCHOOL BC OF WHAT SHE KNEW
omg this quiet girl is so much more than i expected
23. SHE'S MISSES MARILYN . hahah maybe bc she has nothing to talk anymore
OMG SHE SOUNDS LIKE MARILYN HERSELF
this is crazy

Dan:
chapter 6. HAHAHAHAH TITS. ASS hahahahahha oky broski
aww dont be mean to perfect Hanna! :(((
WHOA BRO DONT DO THAT TO HANNA OMG
12. DAN,,, YOU BETTA BE READY TO GET SOME SLAPS. you is horrible
18. still pissed at you Dan. WHY BRO WHY
and yu know what, you don't deserve to be called my bro BC YOU IS A HUUUUGE LEFTOVER. bc no one likes leftovers and yeah, you get my point :)
WHOA HE'S THE KING okay this is getting frickin insane. more insane that is
24. ahhh SEE THIS IS WHAT YOU GET DAN
everyone left you bc of your dumb mistake
dan is hot though bUT STILL DUMB UGGH
yeah that list is something you should've thought about dan before you ruined everything yo<<

ps: i really hope this comment on every chapter (number) wasn't confusing :)

okay this was actually one of the best stories i read. ever. and it was a perfect and original idea of which is frickin amazing. AND NOW I'M OFF TO READ FOUT

okay this is hilarious I love it they are all so crazy and the Raveena plot twist actually just murdered me.

sorry that wasn't very constructive what I mean to say is I'm not super far in but I think I may kinda be in love with this.

hi i'm finally just reading this and like...... hi.

OMG WHAT. It ended that quickly? Damn.
I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE SEQUEL.

Dan's got some hardass shit up his sleeves.

As of right now, chapter 14, Benny is my favorite character.
I find Dan utterly hilarious of how screwed he is.
Melody's a shady biiioootttcchh. Wtf.
Marilyn's fucked.
And Hanna's a poor little thing.
Oh and Kingston... I don't know what I think about him.

IT'S OVER (i kept writing obeer for like 10 seconds, wat) I HAVE LOTS OF FEELS RIGHT NOW MAN. ;_;
but A FOUT FILLED SEQUEL, YAY. I'm excited for that. yay.

So basically, Marilyn's a cat lady now. Cool beans.
I'm glad that her and Fout are happy. c:
And aw, her and Benny stayed friends. That's nice.

DAN IS SUCH A PERV, EW.
IT'S ALREADY HORRIBLE PERVING ON A 13 YEAR OLD
BUT
BRO
YOUR 13 YEAR OLD COUSIN
WHO PERVS ON THEIR COUSIN?
HONESTLY.
THAT'S SO NASTY/HORRIBLE/GROSS/DISGUSTING and so many other things, but if i listed them all, this comment would probably never ever end.

and i'm sorry but i have to rush to finish this comment because of reasons but yea
this entire story was perfect
benny's perfect
you're perfect
the sequel hasn't even started yet, but i know it's perfect.
LOVE YOU, GIRL <3

Oh my goodness...
It's over. I can't believe it's over. :o
:( I'm going to miss this story. But I'm so glad you're writing a sequel! Yay! :D
lol. I can't believe Marilyn named her son Fout. That poor kid. :( But she seems happy with her life now, which you put into the last chapter, which is sort of surprising, but... I'm glad she didn't abandon the kid or anything. Which I wouldn't have put past her before.
lol. I laughed at this line in the last chapter:
'As for Melody? God knows what she does in her spare time. Maybe she does have people film sex tapes for her.'
XD And I thought it was funny how everyone kept assuming that Marilyn was gay. It's interesting what rumors come about.
And so overall... I guess everyone got what they deserved. I kind of feel bad for Hanna, though, since everyone thinks she's crazy. But Dan, oh my gosh. XD He's such a perv. His cousin? Really?
AMAZING JOB WITH THIS STORY. Really. I loved it. :DD
I'm off to the sequel page now! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.... XD

ALL OF MY TEARS
MY FEELINGS
WHAT CAN I DO WITH THEM
god
this was perfect
the whole thing was just perfect
the characters were real and alive and wonderful and i love how benny and marilyn stayed friends.
i'm going to be one of those women who marry guys in prison so i can marry dan.
he's a total perv but skfjowejfowlsjlfks i love him
THIS IS REAL GUISE
anyway
you're wonderful and amazing and i love you
and this was wonderful and amazing and i love it.
i'm going to stalk oh fout until it starts.
love, k. <3

OH MY GOD.

ladjlasjdklasldj that...that was PERFECT. Marilyn is hilarious. I just cannot. I'm still dying over Fout and now that there is gonna be a story about him, Imma die even more omfg.

Of course the Benny thing was more than perfect. WWoHP asjdhlaksjdlkasjkdlajskldjklasjdklajskldajkls. Alex, you GET me. You are perfect.

This ending was just too cute. It turned out better for everyone. Well, except Dan. Loldan. Silly Dan. But yeah, omg pleaaaaaaaaase start the sequel soon. My heart cannot take it.

Lawl, Dan's life sucks. THAT'S WHAT YOU GET MAN.
THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR MESSING AROUND WITH MARILYN LIKE THAT.
NOW, DAN, GO AT LEAST TRY TO BE A GOOD DAD TO FOUT THE TROUT. OR I'LL HAVE TO KICK YOUR FACE IN OR SOMETHING.

gurl, i'm
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to read the epilogue. c:

Oh man, for some reason I thought Dan was Benny for a second so I was like "oMG BENNY YOU'RE A BABY DADDY?! SAY WHAT?!" and then I reread it and I was like "oooooooooh, DAN. This is DAN. phew!" ;)

Well someone clearly thinks that marilyn was hot.

TWO
MORE
CHAPTERS
I'M DYING OMG
ASKDALSDASDIASDASDKL
<3

TWO MORE?! ZOMG. I CAN'T WAIT FOR DAT EPILOGUE MAN. ;)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
<333333333333

also, I'm dying at how Marilyn named her baby mistake lololol. CLEVERRRRR.

AW BB BENNY
i forgot about his heart condition.
but aw, he's 19 and he's still alive. :3
i wuv him so much.


cool beans, melody's no longer a bitch.
that's awesome.

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THREE MORE CHAPTERS.
OH SNAP.
OH SNAP.
OH SNAPPITY SNAP.

I love that Marilyn named her kid mistake. THAT IS SO FUNNY. I love her.
It sucks that everything got better when she left. I really like Marilyn. I think she's just, like, confused. You should make a sequel, featuring Marilyn and her baby and go more in depth on her because gah, I just love her. And have the other characters cameo!
I'm going to cry when this is over.):
I love it so much.
DRAG IT OUT, ALEX. DRAG. IT. OUT.
love, k.<3

Yay for you, Kingston. Yay for you, for getting over Marilyn.

HEY I WAS RIGHT.
SHE HAD A BABY BOY.
cool beans c:
Lmao, Fout. hahaha that's so mean to name a child that.

aw benny and hanna :3
I APPROVE OF THIS RELATIONSHIP.
they're my favorite characters
so
yeah.
c:

GREAT JOB DARLIN'.