Marilyn. - Comments

**BENNY AND HANNA.
god that's embarrassing.

Okay, first off, Melody needs to get her booty kicked, really.
But OH MY GOSH NOW I AM SO HAPPY BECAUSE KINGSTON IS OVER MARILYN AND BENNY AND MELODY ARE TOGETHER.
It's bittersweet, but I kinda like it.
But seriously, Dan needs to suffer. Like now.

Above all, I am going to be so sad when this ends.

Oh, Kingston, you cutie patootie.

Of course, Marilyn is the problem. Without her, everything is aight with the world. Oh, Marilyn, you slutty hoebag (lulz i just wrote slitty hoebag. that just sounds silly).

UPDAAAAAAAAAATE :)

Lol, so Marilyn's pretty much been a slutbag whore man stealer since third grade. Cool beans.

I just really love Benny so much.

Dan's right, Melody's a bitch. BUT BRO. YOU CHEATED ON HANNA AND YOU GOT MARILYN PREGNANT. SO YOU'RE A MAN HOE. THAT'S WAY WORSE THAN BEING A REGULAR HOE. Hanna was going to find out sooner or later anyway, and shit still would've gone down even if Melody hadn't been the one to tell her that Marilyn was pregnant. so yeah.

And oh snap, Marilyn had her baaaaaaaby.
I feel bad for the kid, he or she is going to have a hard time growing up with such a messed up madre and padre. ;c
AND MARILYN JUST NEEDS TO STOP. SHE NEEDS TO STOP BLAMING DAN SO MUCH FOR HER GETTING PREGGERZ. 'cause it takes twooooo babaaayyyy to make a baby~

AND I'M SORRY THIS COMMENT SUCKS. i'm so sleepy ;c

Loved the update!
Ooh... so Marilyn had her baby already? I find it interesting that you skipped ahead, I thought maybe you'd go through the pregnancy a little, or heck, I didn't even know if Marilyn would keep the baby. Because she just didn't seem like she would to me. Idk, that was just a feeling I got.
But this should make this interesting from here on out, and I'm interested to see what you have in store now.
Anyway, overall, great update! :D
I can't wait to see how this all plays out now. :)

SHE ALREADY HAD THE BABY? DAMN. The pacing of this story is so interesting. But either way, Marilyn you slutty hoebag, blaming Dan WHEN IT TAKES TWO PEOPLE TO PRODUCE UN BEBE. See how I randomly mix spanish into my english? yeah idk why that happens. that is also besides the point. The point is is that I love this story mucho :)

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
I love everyone.
I love all their curses and how many fucks half of them don't give. I love how they're all so badass. And ugh. I just love every single thing about this.
All the characters are SO PERFECT. SO. PERFECT.
And I'm so happy that you're all done because that means more updates yay!(:
Keep 'em comin', baybay.

Loving the updates. You're just popping them out, aren't ya? XD
But I suppose a good thing does come out of prewriting. I really need to work on that myself. :P
Anyway, great job with the updates! Sorry for the delay in commenting. There would've been a ton of other comments from me for each individual update if I had gotten on here when they were each posted... *sigh*. I guess this one comment is what can be done for now.
lol. I'm still laughing over their principal's name! 'Dick Long'. XD
Too funny. Feel kind of bad for him, because who would really name their kid that? It's short for Richard, but still... his parents should've just entirely avoided that name.
You're doing a great job. :D Your writing is so humorous and casual and I just love it. :)
Can't wait for more! :D

HOT DAMN. Melody, you funny little bitch you. Oh Dan. He's so hot from the character pictures but damn boy, keep it in your pants. Look what happened with Marilyn. Although, I guess I kinda do ship Melody and Dan. And Benny and me. JUST KIDDING. Idk who I ship Benny with, I just think he's adorbz. But all these characters are so funny. Me gusta. Update soon! :)

Gosh, I love Benny.

HEY
HEY BRO
WHATS GOIN' ON
so um
listen
i was just cruising and i saw you updated this and i was like
HOLD UP WAIT A MINUTE
LET ME PUT SOME FANGIRLING IN IT.
WHAT IS THIS
THIS IS PERFECT AND ADORABLE AND ANGSTY AND CRAZY AS HELL AND I LOVE IT
AND YOU KNOW
YOU SHOULD UPDATE SOME TIME IN THE FORESEEABLE FUTURE c:

Well that was FANTASTIC. Good Lord, why haven't I discovered this story sooner? I am being completely honest, too. I love love the shortness of the chapters–like it gives away the perfect amount PLUS, there are multiple people explaining the situation.

This is seriously so wonderful. I really love Benny and Kingston. I think they're my favorite because they're both just so adorable. Idk how on earth they would get their girls by dating each other, but hey, whatever works for them. They'll still be my favorites.

Please update soooon! :)

This story is effing amazing and you make me jealous that my writings not like yours

si, marilyn's right, dan should have used a condom but
FORREAL
SHE SHOULDN'T HAVE BEEN ~DOIN' IT~ WITH HIM IN THE FIRST PLACE.
AND YES, MARILYN, Y'ALL ARE INDEED IN SOME DEEP SHIT.
YOU DEFINITELY ARE.

SNAP, GET IT HANNA.
GET. IT. GIRL.
i was picturing such an intense fight scene while reading that aha.

And aw, I'm proud of you for finishing up all of the pre-writing for this c:
GOOD JOB MRS. HUTCHERSON. GOOD JOB.
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kxfleofjeowfjwlj
Marilyn is SO FUNNY OMG
can i be her best friend, too?
YOU ARE SO PERFECT, ALEX.
more more more.

qrrrrl.
I don't even know where to start.
Dan, you whiny loser.
Marilyn, I bet you're loose in the front and back porch.
And Melody, you funky punk snitch, ratting out people just to spite Hanna.
They all suck okay.
But this is just flawless.

Blow my mind why don't ya??
Can't wait for the next chapter. I love your presentation. You're giving me the juiciest story without any dialogue at all. Brava diva, brava!

Blow my mind why don't ya??
Can't wait for the next chapter. I love your presentation. You're giving me the juiciest story without any dialogue at all. Brava diva, brava!

Yay, an update! :D
Loved the new chapter! :)
But one thing I need to point out, at the beginning of the one sentence:
'Hanna's gonna have a not a stick...'
I believe you put an extra 'a' in there. You may want to look at that.
But other than that, great update. Dan so deserves this. I mean, really, you can't pity him at all. -_-
Can't wait for more! :)

Hello, you're amazing.
This is perfect. Dan is pretty much embodying my thoughts right now since I've turned into a sailor on my camping trip and every other word out of my mouth is fuck.
AND FUCK.
This story is the shit. I love it so much.
I mean, daaaaayum. It's got pretty much everything in terms of drama.
When Dan's talking, he says something about him not talking to Dan or something along those lines and I think you mean Benny or someone else. Unless Dan has multiple personality disorder or is talking to himself in third person.
ANYWAYS.
This is fucking amazing. As always.