Marilyn. - Comments

Mhm. Melody's right.
SHIT'S
GON'
GO
DOWN.
shit's going to go the fuck down maaaaaan.

SHIT IS GOING DOWN NOW
MONDAY COME NOW
never has a monday been exciting.
UNTIL NOW.

Okay - I have too much excitement since I just played catch-up with this story so I'm not gonna split the comment up like I said I would because I'm just like that but OH MY GA.

MARILYN AND DAN, OOH YOU SUCK.
NEXT, I COULD JUST KISS KINGSTON AND BENNY FOR BEING SO CONCERNED FOR THEIR SECRET ROMANTIC INTERESTS EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE SUPPOSEDLY WITH EACH OTHER, AHEM.
HANNA. HANNA, HANNA, HANNA. YOU'RE SO SWEET, BUT STILL SO NAIVE AT THE SAME TIME. YOU'RE BECOMING EXCEEDINGLY OVERSENSITIVE, AND THAT'S IRRITATING ME QUITE TERRIBLY RIGHT ABOUT NOW. JUST STOP BEING SO IGNORANT AND FIND OUT FOR YOURSELF. QUIT WAITING AROUND FOR SOMETHING TO HAPPEN, BECAUSE IF YOU DO, THEN YOU'LL HAVE NO ONE ELSE TO BLAME.
MELODY. ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS: YOU FRICKEN FUNKY BUSTED TROLL. SUCH A LOUSY EXCUSE FOR A GIRL, AND I AM SPEAKING SINCERELY, FROM THE HEART OF MY BOTTOM.

~

That is all.

Don't ask why most of it's in caps - just felt like it would emphasize my point, or something.
:3

Okay - I have too much excitement since I just played catch-up with this story so I'm not gonna split the comment up like I said I would because I'm just like that but OH MY GA.

MARILYN AND DAN, OOH YOU SUCK.
NEXT, I COULD JUST KISS KINGSTON AND BENNY FOR BEING SO CONCERNED FOR THEIR SECRET ROMANTIC INTERESTS EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE SUPPOSEDLY WITH EACH OTHER, AHEM.
HANNA. HANNA, HANNA, HANNA. YOU'RE SO SWEET, BUT STILL SO NAIVE AT THE SAME TIME. YOU'RE BECOMING EXCEEDINGLY OVERSENSITIVE, AND THAT'S IRRITATING ME QUITE TERRIBLY RIGHT ABOUT NOW. JUST STOP BEING SO IGNORANT AND FIND OUT FOR YOURSELF. QUIT WAITING AROUND FOR SOMETHING TO HAPPEN, BECAUSE IF YOU DO, THEN YOU'LL HAVE NO ONE ELSE TO BLAME.
MELODY. ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS: YOU FRICKEN FUNKY BUSTED TROLL. SUCH A LOUSY EXCUSE FOR A GIRL, AND I AM SPEAKING SINCERELY, FROM THE HEART OF MY BOTTOM.

~

That is all.

Don't ask why most of it's in caps - just felt like it would emphasize my point, or something.
:3

Loved the update!
Ooh... so Hanna knows now. Melody told her. It's for the best, though. Someone needed to tell her, and I guess that person just-so-happened to be Melody.
Great job with the update hon! And I'm gonna need you to comment me again; I lost your last comment, because of the crash. :o Blah, I'm pissed. XD
But anyway, can't wait for more of this! :)

DAT BITCH PREGGERZ.
SNAP.
SNAP

DAN BETTER TELL HANNA
AND I HOPE THAT HANNA DOUBLE BITCH SLAPS HIS FACE FOR BEING A SUCH A LITTLE CHEATING MAN HOE AND GETTING MARILYN PREGNANT.

Hanna should go all Johanna Mason on Marilyn, like "I don't care if you're knocked up, I'll rip your throat out" BECAUSE MARILYN IS A SLUTBAG WHORE~

Holy shiiiiit.
Mare's gots a bun in the oven. And it's Dan's!
Drama-rama! I love it.
Kingston is an awesome name. and ugh, Benny. I love Benny.
I think Hanna should be told but I don't think Benny should be the one to do it.
Dan needs to use those balls for a purpose other than sex. Yep yep.
Fabulous, as always.(:

OH. MY. GOD.
Dan got Marilyn pregnant?! Seriously?!
This is going to cause even more drama. I didn't even think that was possible. :o
YES, DAN SHOULD TELL HANNA! She needs to know about what's been going on! This is just horrible, it'll break her heart, but... it's better than her staying with him and not knowing about what's going on. :(
Or Benny should tell her. Someone needs to tell her. Hell, Marilyn even, though that's probably not the best choice.
Great update. Very intriguing, and way to pull a twist! Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

OH MY GOD THE BITCH GOT A BABY.
WHAT THE HELLLLLLL.
I KIND OF LIKED HANNA. I THINK.
FUCK I DON'T EVEN KNO. BUT STILL.
MARILYN WHAT, WHAT, WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?
DAN, LOOK AT YOUR LIFE AND LOOK AT YOUR CHOICES.
JESUS CHRIST WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME WITH THIS STORY.
I AM IN A RAGE.
A HAPPY RAGE.
MY WORDS MAKE SENSE NONE.
UGH AND I SPILLED MY PEPSI. FROM FLAILING SO MUCH.
YOU OWE ME PEPSI.
GODDAMMIT YOU'RE WONDERFUL.
UGH. POOOOR HANNA.
BENNY IS LIKE IN CONFUSION.
URGH. DRAMA BOMB.

It seems like everyone really hates Dan,
but I have to be totally honest: he sounds like a hot piece of ass.
Maybe I'm thinking this because whenever I hear the name Dan,
I think of the future father of my children, Dan Flint.

And speaking of baby daddy's,
MARILYN IS PREGNANT?
SHE'S FUCKING PREGNANT?
WHAT A SLUTWHORE!
nah, I'm just kidding... loljk no I'm not.
but seriously, how could Dan forget a condom,
and why did Marilyn have to lie about being on the pill?
TALK ABOUT IRRESPONSIBLE.

This story is just one big bowl of drama.
AND I LOVE IT.

keep da chaptas comin gurrl~~
:D

^ Poor Hanna indeed. She didn't find out? :/
I think that would be better than everyone just going around and keeping the secret from her. I mean, just rip the band-aid off already, you know? That way, Hanna can just get over him. Because Dan isn't a guy that's worth crying over, I mean, seriously. So the sooner she gets over him, the less his ego will be bloated up.
Hm, and Marilyn's not nice at all, is she?
Great update, though. Very drama-filled, alright.
Can't wait for more! :D

Poor Hanna.):
She should just get with Benny.
He'd be all nice and sweet to her.
Dan's a jerk-face.<3

Awe, poor, poor Hanna. ;c

WHY ARE MY FRIENDS NOT THIS INTERESTING.
Seriously . I love the drama. I love it all.

Marilyn is a swaggernaut~
And as finnick odair up there said, I love how Kingston's all "this fucking sucks."
He's awesome.
por favor, update soon :3

I love Kingston's attitude.
He's all like "Well, fuck. This fucking sucks."
I love it. He's pretty awesome.
WHY ARE ALL YOUR CHARACTERS SO LIKABLE?
I can't hate any of them.

Loved the update!
Hm... well, you have to admire Marilyn's confidence and flair. Aha. :D It gets you farther than being timid, say, in comparison. I would know because I am. XD
Hm... and I can't help but wonder if she was being sarcastic about Benny and Kingston or naive? Like, does she notice that they both don't want to be together, or was she just using that in example, not knowing at all?
Something to think about, alright.
Great update! Can't wait for the next one! :D

Marilyn is just like my friend.
Only my friend is just a bitch and doesn't think she's attractive. But she tells people to fuck off a lot so.
Haha. Marilyn is so awesome. She's blunt and cocky and ugh I love it.
You don't find very many extremely cocky characters in stories anymore.
FLAWLESS JUST LIKE MARILYN
updatesoonplease.(:

MARILYN AIN'T FUCKIN' AROUND YO.
SHE OOZES SWAG.
But yeah, she's a total babeee. ;o
Urgh, I love the way you set this up. Asdfghjkjhgfds.
Oh my god, I always, like, shit myself when you update.
Eeeeek, I love how she's so sure of herself. She literally gives NO fucks.
Just, ugh. My ovaries are demolished.
<3

NO ME GUSTA DAN.
He's an asshole, bro.
An asshoooole~
and he doesn't deserve Hanna!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, GURL.