Marilyn. - Comments

Loved the updates!
Aw... Melody's just trying to figure out who she is. There's nothing wrong with that. Especially considering that she's a teenager; most of us are still trying to figure out who we are. I know I am. lol. I honestly have no idea what my life's going to be like, five years from now. And that's kind of a scary thought.
And Dan, lol. Yeah... he's kind of a douche. XD And heartless. Hanna doesn't deserve that. But hopefully she does break up with him because she deserves much better. I really hope she's not one of those girls that stays with a guy even after she knows that he's cheated on her. :/
GREEEEEAAAATTTTT UPDATESSSS. :D Aha. Really, loved them both. And sorry for the delay in commenting. :'(
But can't wait for more! :D

REALLY DAN?
REALL?
I MEAN.
HELLO.
WAT.
SIGH.
I love all your OCs.
EXCEPT DAN. FUCK YOU DAN.
Lovely wonderful update!! xo.

I TAKE IT BACK.
DAN IS MY FAVORITE.
Douchebag characters are always so interesting. There's always so much going on with them. I love it.
And whenever I hear the name, I think of Gossip Girl Dan. You created him so well. All horny teenage boy, which is PERFECT.(:
I can't wait until more more more. More of everyone. You give all your characters such a good voice. It's so amazinggg. More please soon!!!

All of your characters are unique and just plain awesome.
So far, I really like Benny and Melody the best.(:
I think it's funny that Benny and Kingston are dating to make people jealous. That makes me smile.(:
YOU'RE WONDERFUL AT THIS DAHLING
And I'm happy that you're updating so quickly!!
Do it again. :3

Melody is a total babe. ;o
I like how short and sweet your chapters are.
Eeeeeek, adore this storyyyy.

BENNY HAS A HEART CONDITION? WHAT? AWH D;
poor baby ;c
Benny's chapter is my favorite chapter out of all of them, so far, fo shizzle. c:
And lolol slut-bag whore. I love that.

OOh, Melody, GET IT, GURL.

I can't wait for more!
<3

WHY HAVE I NOT COMMENTED ON THIS YET?
SHAME ON ME.
omfg this story is so beautiful.
SO ORIGINAL AND SO BEAUTIFUL.

I think Marilyn and Kingston are my favorites as of now.
Marilyn is so, like blunt and she just doesn't have a care in the world and I love it.
And Kingston sounds like a stud. A STUD, I TELL YOU.
I like Benny too. He seems cute and cuddly and I just want to caress his face.
I kind of like Hanna, but... ehh. I'll decide later.

UPDATE SOON GURL~~

Aw, so, you've shown us that Benny isn't totally into the relationship he and Kingston have, either. That makes me feel a little less bad for him, I suppose, seeing as he has similar intentions as Kingston.
lol. Slut-bag whore. I wonder what Marilyn has done to get such a reputation for herself. Or if she's really like that, and it's not just based on rumors or something.
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

My mind is beginning to work out your story and I find it extremely cute and riveting and every positive adjective in between.
Simply put: Beautiful. Bee-you-til-full.
I like Benny. I like Benny lots. Methinks Benny is my favorite.
No, wait. Hanna. Hanna is my favorite.
Okay, I love all of them.
Even Marilyn. But just a tiny bit.

Loved the first three updates! :D
Great job with the chapters. Hm... I find it interesting that one of the cutest couples, according to Hanna, is based on a lie. That's kind of terrible, but... you'd think since Kingston said he's only doing it for Marilyn, the couple wouldn't be as convincing. But they're convincing a few people, at least. Poor Benny, though. :(
I like how you're keeping them short and sweet, the updates. :) Or well, that's probably the wrong context considering the main character won't be sweet, lol, but you get what I mean. :P But anyway, one thing I hate is updates being long and drawn out, because then they take forever to read. So I'm glad you're keeping each update short. :)
Really can't wait for more of this! :D Please update again soon! :)

Liar, this chapter isn't terrible.
It's the opposite.
It's totally

I like Hanna. She seems like a pretty cool kinda gal c:
Keep the flawlessness coming, por favor~

I actually really liked this chapter. It's nice seeing someone not so...harsh after looking into Marilyn's head. Keep it up!

Can't wait for this!!
Update soon please!!

Me gusta.
Everything from the layout to the summary to Marilyn & Kingstons attitudes are perfect.
Seriously.
And 'tits-or-gtfo.'
Lol, I like him already.

So
idek,
but I have a feeling that Kingston's gonna grow legit feelings for Benny somewhere in here.
Or maybe Benny has feelings for Kingston.
Or maybe there are ~mutual feelings~ floating around between them.
Maybe the fact that I'm sleepy beyond belief is simply making me think wildly and they actually just have feelings for Marilyn and Hanna...
I need to know, yo.
I need to knoooooow.

omg i love Kingston
"tits or gtfo"
I LOVE HIM
i think it's funny that he'd pretend to be gay for her
is benny gay? i want to know if benny's gay cause marilyn likes benny, right?
so many people idek man.
BUT THIS IS AWESOME
i'm glad the chapters are short so you can update super fast.
this story is going to be legit.
i can already tell.

OH CALI.

This is lovely. It's very honest and Marilyn is coming off as a you-know-what but you still can't help but love her and unf.
If you ever finish this - which I dearly hope that you do - please publish it.

WELL,
AIN'T SHE PICKY?
loljk, it's good that she knows what she wants in a guy. c:
I can't wait for the next chapter <3

SHE'S SO AWESOME ALREADY
I love how she's all "he has to be this and this but not that" and just all casual about it.
Like it's so easy to find guys like that in the world
Which is probably is if you're Marilyn cause everyone likes her.
i'm so excited
more please

Subscribing. Because oh my god my head hurts from confusion and who is who and this looks amazing.