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  • FuckNo

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    I loved this update and Mikhail is being very frustrating. xD It's fun though. I only noticed one error and that was putting 'vallid' instead of 'valid'.
    August 6th, 2012 at 08:36pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    wow i loved the update!
    August 6th, 2012 at 02:44am
  • bonitalita

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    I miss this story :( hope you get some inspiration soon
    July 21st, 2012 at 10:03am
  • bonitalita

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    :) AWWWW i love it
    June 3rd, 2012 at 04:30am
  • Silver.Heart

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    Oh my god! This is such a beautiful story! I love it! Please keep updating! :3
    May 30th, 2012 at 01:27pm
  • FuckNo

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    The beginning confused me for a little bit. I'm also still not sure what it means for her to be able to see the unicorn since it could mean that she's somehow a dragon or that she's somehow just a supernatural being of some kind OR it could mean that she's pregnant and considered partially supernatural because of that or I could just be completely wrong.
    May 30th, 2012 at 10:15am
  • River Young;

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    Okay, so this chapter made me legit LOL. I love Brent and Fergus! They are hilarious!!! The narrative..I just died! Awesome chapter!
    May 30th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • River Young;

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    I love how you made the difference with Kelpies and Unicorns. That's a really original idea. :) And jus the talk about his world...very interesting!

    Love the update! :D
    May 18th, 2012 at 02:59pm
  • FuckNo

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    Still an epic story. :)
    May 18th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • SmurfGirl

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    lol those two i swear, they r so cute together. =) I loved the new update. I thought the info about the kelpie was pretty cool.
    May 17th, 2012 at 07:17pm
  • IceDeath.

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    Love the new chapter. It's very good. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!
    May 17th, 2012 at 07:05pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Very sexy lol
    May 17th, 2012 at 06:40pm
  • bonitalita

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    About time lol :) I thought they would be celibate forever! I am soo happy with the updates :)
    May 17th, 2012 at 12:51pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    That was awesome. Very sexy very descriptive ; )
    April 22nd, 2012 at 06:34pm
  • River Young;

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    “Take my hand, little dragoness.”
    Lia frowned, “But I'm not a-”
    “You are to me,” He said, his voice turning gruff, “Now take my hand.”

    I just went awwwwww!!!!!!

    The way you describe her feelings when they kiss is quite admirable. I suck at that. -.-

    You know...I don't usually read these parts of stories...>.> But you have got me so hooked on Mikhail and Lia...I couldn't NOT read. And now I feel awkward. xD Not that you wrote it awkward at all! I'm just awkward. >.>

    Great chapter!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 04:43pm
  • Call_me_Dot

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    new reader and i reallly love this story ;)
    April 21st, 2012 at 09:00pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    I thought i was great. it was plenty descriptive and it isn't to fast in my opionion.
    April 21st, 2012 at 05:02pm
  • IceDeath.

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    wow!! Love the new chapter. I'm almost wondering if she is a dragoness but she doesn't know it yet. such a good story. Update soon!!
    April 21st, 2012 at 05:57am
  • FuckNo

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    Too fast? Nope. I thought it was fine. Especially since they are super attracted to each other.
    April 21st, 2012 at 05:42am
  • marrsval

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    Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out! =)
    April 18th, 2012 at 03:40am
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