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  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Aww arent they cute nd stubborn for liking each other lol Update again!
    March 5th, 2012 at 08:59pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    I love the new banner! And the chapter as well of course.
    March 5th, 2012 at 04:17am
  • FuckNo

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    “Because if I go in there my close will be destroyed. I have nothing else to wear.” You meant clothes, not close. lol

    "Here she was, stuck in an unknown place – now she knew how Mikhail felt back at her apartment – with only one allay." Ally, not allay.

    "It was also a call to any available dragoness' in the area." The apostrophe after dragoness isn't really needed because you're not making it possessive.

    I loved the chapter. I really, really did. However, I preferred the old banner. Pretty sure.
    March 5th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • bonitalita

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    :) :) :) :) I LOOOOVE it!!! this is so well written... and soo freaking hilarious. This is another story i will continue to reread as you update. You should make a book. :) i would buy it..... your like 3 for three with me
    March 3rd, 2012 at 02:46am
  • SmurfGirl

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    You did very well with your "romance" scene in my opinion. I can't wait to see what happens now that he's back in dragon form.
    February 26th, 2012 at 05:48pm
  • FuckNo

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    Awesome! I loved this chapter!

    I'm also very curious as to how their relationship will change now that he's in dragon form again. Although it slightly has come full circle except this time he's making it so that she falls onto his back while as the first time it was a happy accident.
    February 26th, 2012 at 06:06am
  • FuckNo

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    This chapter was epic! You put her had turned an interesting shade of red instead of head, but I really did adore this chapter. So cute!
    February 24th, 2012 at 07:16am
  • River Young;

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    Awesome chapters! When Mikhail was sad that she left him, I was like Awwww! xD It was so funny! There were a few mistakes in chapter 6....I think it was chapter six, but it was still great. ;)
    January 23rd, 2012 at 06:48pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    LOL the dragon is so funny. wanting to fight a car that's just to much! Anyway I did see a 1 thing that needs to b fixed. One spot u have a ; insted of ' in a word.
    January 22nd, 2012 at 05:15pm
  • FuckNo

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    This chapter was hilarious. I do love that he wants to protect her from cars, especially since I have a wicked hardcore fear of driving. I also love that he enjoys teasing her. xD
    January 22nd, 2012 at 02:12am
  • SmurfGirl

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    hahaha go Lia! That was a great chapter
    January 19th, 2012 at 05:40pm
  • FuckNo

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    That's hilarious. I loved it. :)
    January 19th, 2012 at 05:49am
  • SmurfGirl

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    LOL! that chapter was awesome! I can so imagine that whole thing happening! and i find the dragon so funny!
    January 19th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • River Young;

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    O.o Whoa! Crazy dragon power!!! :D Awesome! This chapter made me laugh! His comment on them both running around naked made me laugh out loud!! xD
    January 18th, 2012 at 08:24pm
  • FuckNo

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    I loved this chapter! :)

    His erection made me laugh. I'm immature.
    January 18th, 2012 at 03:40am
  • River Young;

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    You switched a little between 1st and 3rd person at the beginning...

    But OMG! This made me LOL! xD I love the dragon's(his name escapes me) blunt, humorous personality! xD
    January 14th, 2012 at 06:07am
  • SmurfGirl

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    I love this story so much! this is my favorite you've done!
    January 13th, 2012 at 03:39am
  • FuckNo

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    Teehee. :) That's awesome.
    January 13th, 2012 at 01:28am
  • River Young;

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    BAHAHAHA! This made me laugh! xD I loved it! The tattoo sounds amazing!
    January 9th, 2012 at 08:26pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    omg i love the new chapter!!!! can't wait for more!
    January 8th, 2012 at 06:16pm
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