March 28th, 2012 at 09:23pm
Tossed Treasures - Comments
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Im so happy they made up, they are so cute together!!!March 28th, 2012 at 05:20pm
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Sounds like a promise. Haha. This is such an awesome story. :D Can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!March 28th, 2012 at 04:30am
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My brain is a little dead right now.
My first thought was sex though.March 28th, 2012 at 01:54am -
i loved the new chapter. there were a few spelling mistakes so u might wanna take a look at that, otherwise it was awesomeMarch 28th, 2012 at 01:44am
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Love this story. It's awesome. I hope that she forgives him, and that she just might be a dragoness....? I subscribed and I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!March 19th, 2012 at 04:05am
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And this one makes you 40 comments :)
Cannot believe that its like the same four posting your other subscribers suck, but we are awesome enough to make up for it.March 11th, 2012 at 11:05pm -
I love the update! I have no idea why she thought she could escape dragons, but that brought a smile to my face. It is human nature though to escape. :)
And how her voice was powerful enough to make a dragon come to a stop was AWESOME writing. :)
Cannot wait for the next one. For some reason its bringing Alice in Wonderland to my head where she's going to face the queen and all. :)
Again I LOVE THIS STORY. :)
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Awwww!!! This was sad! Why, Lia, why???? >.<March 11th, 2012 at 04:52am
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Yikes. >_< I hope he finds a way to make it up to her.
And helpful me time!
And the only time Feargus came for a visit was when he was loosing control over his kelpie instincts. <--- losing control, not loosing.
“No,” Lia's voice broke, but she didn't stop, “No. Do you even know what your mother told me on my way here? That you left me to find a dragoness – a female of “greater importance” and one who could give you more pleasure then I ever could.” <--- This is slightly nitpicky but it should be 'greater importance' and not "greater importance" since when you quote something within a quote you switch to singular quotes. In the United Kingdom an acceptable way is the exact opposite, so that's a fun fact.March 10th, 2012 at 07:48pm -
Harsh there Lia very harsh. I guess he does deserve it though. I can't wait to see what happens next plz update soon!March 10th, 2012 at 07:46pm
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Well I cant say he didnt deserve it but I feel bad for him. Man he's gonna have to do some serious making up to her. Update soon!March 10th, 2012 at 05:54am
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I recognized the Kelpie from a past book I read...I just couldn't remember what it was called. lol But I knew it was nothing good. xD
Great update!! Can't wait to see what happens!March 9th, 2012 at 04:19am -
:) I really liked this chapter! I don't quite like his mom so much, but eh she's the queen. Which explains why he was so spoiled in the beginning. :) Updated soon please!March 8th, 2012 at 05:35pm
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I like this story a lot its something im not used to but each page pulls me in for more. update soon!March 8th, 2012 at 02:43pm
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I did know it was a Kelpie cuz a friend of mine did a story about a kelpie. and he so needs to get back there and help her! Great chapter i didnt' see any mistakes at all.March 7th, 2012 at 08:29pm
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Well I know where he gets his attitude from nd he need to bring his dragon ass back nd help herMarch 7th, 2012 at 07:46am
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I loved this chapter! However, nope I wasn't able to guess it was a kelpie because my only experience with kelpie was in Harry Potter and I don't remember them being horses in that, but apparently I just wasn't paying attention 'cause I just googled them and they totes look like horses. o_O
Now I need to reread Harry Potter stuff.March 7th, 2012 at 05:49am -
OMG! I feel so horrible for not commenting! I forgot that it updated and then it never told me when it updated again so I forgot about it!!!
She's in his world now...Oh, dear. o.OMarch 7th, 2012 at 03:38am -
:) I love this story. I kinda want her to be a dragon somehow..... He's so cute thinking he hurt her.
:)March 6th, 2012 at 04:40am
I'm in love!! <3
I liked the guard dragon for some reason. He was nice...in a forced kind of way...I don't know. I just got a kick out of it. x)
Great update!