Keep the Lights On - Comments

OMG UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!:) This is getting so interesting ah:D

OH CRAP! Jordan's friend was her loved one that was in the car! It all makes sense! HE makes so much sense now. Jeez, now I feel terrible on top of Ari feeling depressed. It all makes so much sense now. I wonderif Jordan will confirm it right off the bat or keep it under wraps? Though its not like you will tell me ;) That just means you have to keep the updates coming.

I mean I know he doesn't get the look in to her head, but Craig has most of the pieces, why can't he just put them together and just get over his pms to be sympathetic! I also understand that he would be frustrated after a while, but still that's the last thing a depressed person needs is to feel like they are dissapointing someone. I haven't ever watched a depressed person (because you can't really watch yourself) but I know there must be patience involved. I don't think just because you are having a crappy day, making theirs worse is a good idea. That person could do a whole lot more damage than your crappy day. Needles to say I wasn't really impressed with him, but I understand. He has been dealing with this a lot longer than most with terrible results.

Now on to my favorite topic of the story James! Can he be any more perfect or cute? Do you know how hard it is not to wake up your whole house while reading about such a perfect character? When he was at her door, I wanted to jump up and to a victory dance. Also when he catches her smiling and he's so happy about it then he tells her its all right to smile with his little grin, I could have died from happiness. He can bring me juice anytime. DO NOT DO ANYTHING DIFFERENT TO THE JAMES CHARACTER BECAUSE I LOVE HIM! lol. He's my favorite character of yours so far though Craig and Pascal are close seconds because I am a sucker for the protective brother/father characters. Also I don't usually review right after I read chapters, but every time I say I'm going to think about what I want to say in your review, after the chapter I immediately review. That's how awesome of a writer and how much I enjoy reading all of your work!

I like that you had Jordan's POV and I think that Jordan and Ariana are probably going to fight.
I really want to know what happened between Jordan and Ariana.

What happened between her and Jordan. Great update, awesome writing.

I really want to know what went on to make her and Jordan hate each other so much!

Ok, so 1) This story is very good and 2) I really love your characters. and finally 3) I am itching to know what has gone on in the past between her and Jordan. I liked that you put his POV in there, it really rounds out the story. Cant wait to see where this goes!:)

and to answer your question, I would be shocked if they didnt have some kind of angry, heated exchange that ends up with her in tears and him feeling angrier...? Just my thoughts. Update!

I'm glad that she's feeling more comfortable with James!
I'd like to think Jordan won't be a jerk to her but I doubt it!

Is the Jordan POV from an old scene or is that happening right now? Sorry, I'm just a bit confused about the timeline. But I love the progress being made with James. I can't believe that he can make her smile! That is so sweet. I don't know what is wrong with Jordan though. I'm starting to think he might have mental problems too. He's talking (thinking) crazy!

PLEASE KEEP THE UPDATES COMING!!!! WHAT DOES JORDAN SAY TO HER??????? WHY DOES HE HATE HER????????

I MUST KNOW EVERYTHING. Jordan is being so cruel and I want to know if it's warranted. I just ache for Ari!

I'm thinking they're actually gonna talk rather than fight. Keep wondering what's gonna go down.

Ohhhh... Jordan POV! Are we going to get so juicy talk of the past? I hope so! Keep up the great work. I really love seeing notifications of updates from you!

Just sat down and read the whole thing. Curious to see where things are going and find out who the mystery man is. With every chapter, I keep hoping Ariana will find a way to smile

This was great. I read it all in one go, and now I'm excited for the next update. I really enjoy the more serious story line you having going here, and I can't wait to see how it unfolds.

I absolutely am so excited for this story! It's a great story and you are a fantastic writer!

Great update. I want to know what happened

Great chapter!
I can't wait to read what happens next :)

I really liked the chapter, update soon!

great chapter! Can't wait for more!

per usual, one of my favorites!!!!