Keep the Lights On - Comments

Awesome! Im starting to get ideas of why she is in such a bad position in her life including the Aiden situation! I loved it!

Great update!

Great update. The whole Aiden situation is terrible. Why would she be blamed for his death. I want her and James to be together. Glad she is startin to feel better. Cant wait to read the history with Aiden.

I'm happy Ari is finally becoming a little more happier:) and her and James eeep haha I can't wait for an update:)

Loved it! I'm glad that she's finally starting to feel like she belongs

Great chapter! I'm glad we finally got some insight on Jordan and Ari's issues. I hope Ari really is getting better and that her relationship with James continues to grow. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Wow. So much happened in this chapter. It's like the big breakthrough chapter. I feel like a lot of my questions were answered and Ari's and Jordan's too. It seems like things are starting to look up. The Jordan situation appears to be working itself out with a little communication and understanding. Everyone is teasing her about James, which I definitely think is a good sign. She seems more at east, is talking more, smiling more. And she feels absolute! I really hope this keeps up because set backs are a bitch. I can't wait to watch James and Ari's relationship grow and get to know Ari's real personality. I'm really glad she is finally starting to feel at home with Craig and his family. Things are looking good. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Loved the update! When she tells James I think he'll be fine. He seems sweet and understanding, so I don't think he'll flip out!
I still don't know how I feel about the trade. Even though he said he was planning to play next season and see how he fits in, I think he would have ended up leaving Pittsburgh and they wouldn't have gotten anyone for him. As much as I hate to see him go, I'm glad he went to Carolina and can play with Eric and Brandon Sutter is a great player so Pittsburgh got lucky in getting him! It'll be different seeing him in a Canes jersey!

I think James will be fine. He might be shocked, but he should be okay. The chapter for me was actually a little hard to me because I still can't believe Jordy's gone. :'(

I loved the chapter! It is really sad that Jordan got traded. The trade better be worth it because Jordan is an amazing player!

Aww. Glad stuff is working out. So long Staalsy. Definitely heartbroken. I'm such a masochistic. I watched NHL 36: James Neal again and every time there was a glimpse of Jordan my eyes watered. Waaah!! But the amount of James, Duper, and Cookie's denial made up for it.

Anyways back to the story. Max being a loudmouth. Priceless. Jordan and Ari patch up. Thank fucking God. The image of a sleeping Nealer. Most inhuman-like noise made in my life. Ari smiling at James sleeping. Amazeballs. About sums up my feels.

Update soon!!!

AMAZING Chapter! I'm really looking forward to seeing Ari take part in life.

Sleeping James would be absolutely adorable.

Jordan + my heart + events of the weekend = :(

Gah. I loved this chapter. It finally showed us an insight to the animosity Jordan has(had) for Ari. And she is finally getting around to feeling better in Pittsburgh. I hope she opens up soon!

Im so happy you updated:) This was a really good chapter, i'm glad she is starting to find her happy again. As for the Jordan Staal trade to Carolina- Im sad that he won't be in a pens jersey anymore, but im kinda excited to see him evolve as a player even more since he will be their top player along with his brother Eric. You can't go wrong with that much Staal on the ice at once..yum! Update soon! Looking forward to more James Neal.

btw, really like Jordan's POV.

btw, really like Jordan's POV.

You'll be able to read the story if you highlight the whole page.

maybe it's just my ipod but half of the chapter ( idk how to explain this lol) on the left side is cut off. :/

I want to know what she could have done to get Jordan so upset. I mean it can't have been like murder or anything like that, since she's still out and about in public. lol.

I hope Jordan doesn't go all douche bag on her when they go outside, but what would posses her to agree to something like that?

I hope Nealer doesn't get hurt. Also, yay Leafs/Blue Jays references :P

Update soon! I really want to find out what Jordan has to say to her.