Teal. - Comments

Im so happy you updated! Im dying to know how skyped her!

I love this story. I'm so jealous of how amazingly you write! :D Seriously, you have captured my interest which is both good and bad because I read this as break from philosophy reading and now I don't want to stop!

I will seriously comment about this story when I'm at home :) Till then sweet Letters! <3

i love the story so far! Well it's included in my list of subscription.

I don't mind providing feedback, no worries. I enjoy it!

It's good that his surgery wasn't too serious. I mean, surgery is always a scary thing in of itself, but yeah. I'm glad it went well. :)

As for this chapter... it's fantabulous! I am just loving Teal's character more and more. She kind of reminds me of a couple people I know. She's really real, and she's honest. Maybe I could even say she's down-to-earth. Not a lot of people have that air about them combined with the mischievious air I keep seeing in Teal, but that's partly why I adore her so much!

Also, I'm fairly certain this is my favorite line so far:
"The jet black locks were being blown in a chaotic mess in front of those deep navy eyes which were dead set on him as she strode down the sidewalk like it was a runway."
When I read that I just laughed -- like a snort-laugh, haha. It's great description. I could just picture it in my head. :D

Julian's sort of growing on me as well hehe :P

I hope you don't mind I decided to reply to your comment on my profile with just another story comment, but to answer your question I'm doing fine! Thanks :)

This newest chapter is great, it's really taken the story up another notch, if you know what I mean. I've really been enjoying it, but now I feel like I'm attached. I did not see Teal being the author coming at all at the beginning! I thought it was great when Teal got the attention of those two girls instead of Julian. I think that was when I started putting a couple pieces of the puzzle together. But now I'm wondering why Teal wants him to consider taking the part; it is her book afterall, so she must have her reasons.

And I hope your father's surgery goes well! Tell me how it goes if you get a chance!

Interesting. When I saw the picture I thought it was Dr. Who fanfiction. I don't know anything about Dr. W, but I love your writing and gave it a shot. Love this so far. Original idea. Great writing. I love you. <3

Okay, so the picture of Matt Smith drew me in, but I really like where this is going. It's different.

NEW STORY!

Hi. Okay, I love Teal's character so far. I really want to see where this goes, because truthfully I have no idea. The beginning seems sort of slow, but I was still interested while reading it so that's a good sign. I didn't look at the catagory or anything for this story (I just charged right in), but just know that my romance sniffer has been activated. Thank you, and good day. :D

First thought: Matt Smith.
I like Teal a lot so far. She seems... new. Fresh. Hopefully exciting.
I'm liking this a lot so far, but of course it all depends on where it goes. I'm optimistic, though, the beginning is rather good.

I like this so far. The picture of Matt Smith actually drew me in to click on your story, but I like it. :)