Little Bit of Truth - Comments

Comment swap. :)

Very nice story. I liked the layout a lot, it's simple but very cute.

Grammar and spelling is good and your characters a great.

I liked the way you started out chapter six. It made me laugh, and it was completely true. :)

You have a good writing style, and I will definitely be back to read more (I only got a couple chapters in) when I'm not so tired.

And about the taxi driver, I think that in some cases, like a taxi driver, where you don't know someone and the chances of seeing them again are slim go ahead pour your heart out. Luckily Ed was a nice guy. :)

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I can't.
This majestically devine story is just-
well, if the right words to describe your story existed, I would use them.

oh my goodness, this story is incredile! I found it through comment swap, but I'm so glad I id becaue I loe your witing style and the story, it's just so oetic and raw. Notto mention it's descripvewithout going over the top. Great work dear, and P.S. the song is lovely too c:

Comment Swap: Chapters 1-5

Je l'adore! I really liked this story, and the layout is gorgeous! Your grammar and spelling was spot on. I didn't find any mistakes in the first five chapters. Your writing style is lovely; it's not overtly adorned in frills, and it gets straight to the heart of the matter. Your characters are really wonderful. Eliza reminds me a lot of myself. I thought she was well-rounded and interesting, the kind of lead character that holds a reader's attention.I'm subscribing to this story so, I'll remember to come back and finish the rest of it later. I'll comment again when I reach the last chapter. ^.^

From comment swap.

I love this :) great punctuation, spellings, grammars, vocabulary. Makes it comfortable to read. However yes it id seem a bit far-fetched for her to pour out her hearts to a stranger (the taxi driver).

Great job :)

Oh goodness, how have I not seen this story before? Running away to avoid her problems? Eliza is my type of girl. She's chatty, and amusing, but not ridiculously so, and I must say I adore Ed already. What a charming old man. I had to smile at the line about his wife calling him a pain in the rear end, that was just far too cute.

This already seems charming, very glad comment swap brought me here, still wondering how I haven't read this before! I'll certainly be back to read more as soon as I find my phone's charger; best of luck!

*from comment swap*
Well, all I read was the first chapter. But I do really like your writing style, and I love Eliza's character. I can really relate to her. This is such a cute idea, I love it. When I have time, which is probably tonight, I'll read the rest :)

I feel like...
i don't have any problem with this story
in fact, this is probably going to be me whenever I'm old enough to just up and move when I please because I don't trust people and I always screw up relationships with people
but,
in the first chapter when she was talking to the cab driver I was kind of like..woah okay that's really personal and deep. like normally people wouldn't just pour their heart out about their life story to someone they don't even know...that being said I found that a bit...awkward.
i also feel like her habit is being described so many times that its kind of like "okay I get it, you move when things get tough you've said that ten times already" and that the story that she told the can driver is just going to keep coming up over and over and I feel as if I'd get tired of that.
but,
I do really really enjoy your plot and I find that your writing style is really nice and I like reading it :)

this was great! literally finished it in less than two days :-)) it was so refreshing and wasn't too cliche, like the it had the smile cliche moments but the whole story was new and interesting and ive been reading it straight for two hours

I thought I'd only get around to reading the first couple of chapters, but I actually couldn't stop! It was so sweet and cute and funny and yet there was some depth to it too!

You've really built some amazing characters who were at first interesting and humourous and waited until later to reveal what happened. It's a great way to get sympathy for your characters, because the reader has grown attached to them and it doesn't come off as an attempt at added angst to create drama.

I'm a little sad I finished it, I really adore Eliza and Noah, but the ending was sweet and I love how it came around to her running away again, if on,y for a gamer.

If anything you write is half as good as this, you've got an incredible gift! Keep it up<3

Oh wow this awesome, here I thought I was just going to give a proper comment about my opinion of the story and maybe criticize it a little bit, maybe give some advice, But nope. Nothing to Criticize, nothing to correct or give advice on. I love it :) I'm so going to read every single chapter of this story! It is definitely worth the time! Have a wonderful day!

i'm so proud of you marie!! <3 i saw that you were on projectfiction and i was like omgggg. its amazing. and i liked this chapter. sappy noah is great XD haha. no worries on updates, darling, just study and concentrate on ur AP tests. MUCH LOVE <3

i loved this chapter, holy crow. i almost cried. hahah. and you thought of two specific reader's during the "oh, noah" part, huh? am i one of them? lol jkjk. anyways, i can feel this story coming to an end and i'm kinda sad to see it end, but i'm very proud of you for writing it. much love, darling <3

I love this so muuuuch <3
Please update soon!
Oh my, Noah <3 He's just so perfect @-)

I love the way you write too, keep it up :)

GAH! i couldve cried, i swear. this chapter is so amazingly romantic i love it XD well...the end was, anyways. NOOOOOAHHH. lord have mercy, that boy is amazing. i love him. this chapter was amazing and i'ma be sad when it ends....so then i'll just have to read through it over and over again ;P much love <3

ohmygosh. marie, i've been waiting for this chapter! its so cute. i'm glad that Noah said something to Eliza's mom. she's such a bitch :( lol. i love love love this story! absolutely 110% i love you as well DUHH. my twin. ha. much love <3 cant wait for more XD

I love this story. You're writing is very good. It's nice to read something that is really well written. I can really feel the characters pain. :>
Eliza is pretty strong in my eyes. Being able to walk around with that huge weight and judgment on her shoulders. I think I would've already attacked my mom by then. Thank you for writing this. c:

P.S~ Update. I can't wait for more.

hmm, its a shame her mother blames her. thats a very silly thing to do.

awh, marie, i'm sorry you lost two subscribers. but who cares about those two, they won't ever know whats going on with Eliza and Noah. i really did like this chapter. i thought something was about to go down. i so wanted Noah to call out her mother for being a bitch. that would've been great. and towards the end i was singing in my head "can you feel the love tonight..." lol. XD much love <3

Oh Noah<3

Sorry I haven't been commenting :c
I've been moving out of my mom's and everything's been really hectic :/

Anywho.
I love Noah.
Objections to Team Peeta?
None, whatsoever. :)

Is this story still amazing?
Oh hell yeah.

I wonder who Louis is? :x