Little Bit of Truth - Comments

I honestly love this story. There really is nothing to say besides that. Ha. It's well written and the banter between the two of them is hard not to like.

Basically, I subscribed...haha.

Oh Noah, you sneaky boy. xD

Hi. I'm a new reader.

I love this. :)

And after the prologue i'm really excited

OK. Really good, great idea for starters. A bit awkward here and there, but overall, really good. I feel as if the story of the boy that hurt her was relayed much too quickly, in the fashion that it was done so in. I don't know what to tell you to do different in that manner.

Good ideas! I like Eliza. (:

I saw this when you first posted it but I never got the chane to actually read through it. I first wanna say that it's a great story plan, love the ideas and characters and you have the perfect balance of dialogue, thoughts, and actions. Keep it going! Can't wait for an update.

This was not a problem for Eliza though, she had her music and dancing wherever she went.

The words don't fit completely, I recommend changing dancing to dance.

However, what Eliza Marie did come to realize was that mistakes were made for the sake of creating errs in life.

By errs did you mean errors? Unless it's a word I don't know then this is really embarrassing. $: