Little Bit of Truth - Comments

okay. i love the story. this chapter made me want to cry b/c it had so much thought put into it. AND i love you even more for talking about the hunger games. i am all for team peeta. and i volunteer for the cave scene. lol XD anyways, there is no part of the story that i don't like. its all good :)

you switched tenses in chapter 17 from 3rd to 1st right when Eliza and Noah get down to breakfast. just saying

So cute. Love the story. I even Subscribed!! Can't wait to read more. Update soon. :D

this newest chapter, the room, had sparks by coldplay playing in my mind. just thought i'd tell you

aw, how cute ^.^

hmm, I cant wait to see what awaits them

". . .I had a dream I was on an airplane afraid to fly, . . . . and then I rolled awake. . . .
Can you take me back to the person I used to be, back when you were there for me,
I know it seems like forever but do me this favor please.
Way back when we were stupid, and held grudges just to help us sleep.
Oh my God, how ridiculous we're we?" =] you know I think in songs

Anyway love this story. My favorite sentence had to be the last. City that never sleeps, the dreamer and the insomniac. Truly great wordplay

waiting for more story, miss!
off you go, then.

^_^heytheredelilahlee

No, it was not crap! I love Noah and Eliza <3 I wish it was longer!

comments? just me? ok. i feel like that last part could have been dramatically drawn out more. for little fan girls like me who are living vicariously through the sassy american

^_^heytheredelilahlee
aka- marie.eza's greatest fan

OH BTW PLEEZE WRITE MORE, IM DYING

I mean, it's romantic, but I see the term "infatuated" as something super strong, very twilight.Very all encompassing, all consuming. Are they at that point yet?
Also, be careful with the dancing descriptions. It sounds kind of awkward.
(friend mode: still love it, what song are they dancing too? when the grinding started i heard the intro to "time is running out " by muse for some reason, and like strobe lights, all raunchy like you know i like =p lol )

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sha-la-la-la-la-la my oh my, look at the boy, too shy, aint gonna kiss the girl!

dammit, waiting for the kiss!
oh well, tut tut, well done regardless.

go write more, i've caught up.
off you go.

^_^heytheredlelilahlee

Marie, can you tell Noah to stop being so gotdamn adorable? kthxbye

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child's play, my dear Marie.
the line about big ben not being the name of a hamburger is from What a Girl Wants

i feel like the oli sykes quote is the one about making babies happy and girls wet. . . .he'd say something rachet like that, and i was dying, so it MUST be that.
now whats my prize?

^_^heytheredelilahlee

Eliza - 3, Helen- 0
KO, and the bitch goes down
the crowd goes wild.

^_^heytheredelilahlee

is the mother's name Lillian or Susanne?

damn, that "pint-sized American" sure is sassy.
i dig.

^_^heytheredelilahlee

me, me!
im excited for dinner! =D

^_^heytheredelilahlee