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I'm still hardcore Team Mason, but I have this twisted feeling Chase might actually do the right thing.

I finally read the most recent chapters and my goodness, I'm so glad that it's finally being updated again. I really like this story and it makes my day that I'm getting to read more of it.

Hey, so I must of subscribe to this long ago with the intention of reading it or read a little and never come back aha, but I got the update notification through emails and I have literally just binge read this over the last couple of days, authors comments too, and I love it, to start with I was team Mason but now I like Chase a bit more but out of it all I think I would say I'm Team Ash. Also I love Chloe and Layla they are great characters too and your author comments make me think of Chloe a little because of how hyperactive they read :P I think its sweet that you apologies and mention everyone in your comments and I really do like this story it is really good :)

I just really hope that Chase doesn't turn out as Mason says 'cuse I think I would die if that had happened :S

But then I do love it :) and I also love how you talk about how the characters write this themselves as well, you are a great Author and I am glad I was subscribe to be reminded to read this awesome story :)

I FORGIVE YOU FOR NOT UPDATING IN LIKE FOREVER BECAUSE THAT CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD. BUT WAIT NO I TAKE THAT BACK. WHY DOES THE STORY HAVE TO END IN A FEW CHAPTERS. NO I DON'T FORGIVE YOU ANY MORE BECAUSE I NEED MORE OF THOSE BOYS SERIOUSLY. BUT I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY. JEEZ. I AM SO CONFLICTED RIGHT NOW.

Chase is such a cutie (a cutie that's kind of a sexual maniac but I guess that's okay with Ash right?) and I love the interaction between him and Ash. Need to find me a boy like that asap. And I really, really, REALLY hope that Chase isn't like that Derek fool. I mean, come on, passing up on Mason who is also a sweetie (who really cares for Ash and I appreciate that)? I honestly can't wait for the next chapters to be posted... but that means that this story will be over T__T Again, I am super conflicted as of this moment and I blame you and your wonderful writing abilities. Damn it.

(But no seriously I love your story and it's everything amazing and beautiful and I never want to it to end).

yaaass<33

Ahhhh an update I'm so excited to see this come to an end.

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was so surprised and excited to see this updated! Great chapter! And I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story!

Well okay. I know I said it before, but I don't care for Mason. He's just that stupid voice inside everyone's head that makes you doubt yourself.
Anyway, this was a great chapter, and I can't wait to see the ending of this story.

I was so happy when I saw this was updated you have no idea. You're not the worst, by the way, at all haha
I loved the chapter!

Oh my god. I almost screamed when i saw the email saying that you updated!! Im gonna be honest, i kinda forgot about this story, but seeing there's a new chapter made me remember how much I absolutely adore it. I can't wait to see the rest, although im a bit sad there's only basically three chapters left :( anyways, I loved this chapter, chase and ash are just adorable together, and I can only hope what mason said at the end doesn't turn out to be true for chase :/

Oh my God.

That's honestly the only thing going through my head right now.

OH MY GOD.

I stumbled across this today -- not really, I was looking through your stories -- and I read it all. I fangirled and hyperventilated my way through this and, holy crap you're such an amazing writer and it KILLS ME that you haven't finished this. I guess I now know how my readers feel when I neglect to finish something.

Okay, so I just finished this, and oh my god, this is absolutely amazing, you have no idea. You must update soon because I need more of this to survive. And finally, Chase has admitted his feelings for Ash. Though I just wonder what'll happen with Mason. But I must know. You're an amazing writer, and this story is perfect.

Ash would probably make a good bottom. He's a little more feminine than Chase; though if it was the other way around, that'd be a twist.

I honestly think that Ash would be the more conventional bottom, but If Chase were to take that role... I think that there would be a little more of a plot twist in itself. It would add to the sensational ending that is inevitably coming to take us all with it...

pleasepleaseplease update because I have reread this story twice now and I really need MORE So pleaseeeeeeeee

It's fucking 4 in the morning. And you made me read it all. You should be proud of this,omg<3 pleaseeeee update!!

Read all the chapters in a couple of hours wow I'm just in love with this story. Can't wait for the update! I think It'd be a nice twist if Ash was on top... but Chase does seem like the manlier of the two but idk jdakjsfkljd have i mentioned that i just love this story ok sorry byr have a great day!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. ASH. CHASE. KABAM.

MY MIND IS AS BLOWN AS THEY ARE I SWEAR TO THE GOD OF ALL UNICORNS. That chapter was perfect and definitely worth the wait. Twins is possibly my favourite story on this site STILL and your writing is just perfect.
And Ash is definitely on the bottom. I mean, CHASE IS AS MANLY AS YOU CAN GET. but it would be interesting if Ash were on top ;]
But thank you so much for updating! I really love is story.

Aww I love this story !! More more please! c:

I just read all 21 chapters in one day !! This story is great :D
I think ash should bottom first since chase seems to be the more outspoken and manlier of the two, but that's just my opinion
Update soon:D