The Greatest Lie. - Comments

Well isn't he just a creepy ass motherfucker?
And yet, I am oh-so-very turned on...

I suck when it comes to reading and commenting on this story. You write it so well and differently and I can just never find the time to read it. This is really good, though. No lie.

:)

I love this story so damn much! Sam is just this crazy character, because you don't know whether to believe he's a good guy, or if he's going to break Sierra's heart. And I love Sierra, especially how she tries to see the good in people. It makes her giving Sam a chance make more sense. I completely love this! I cannot wait for more, though I don't want Sierras' heart to get broken because I love her!
Update again soon please!!

Hm...this leads me to think that Sam isn't as nice as he's led Sierra to believe...

I'm at my grandma's hehehehe :D So yeah, I'd definitely wanna read a Max Helyer fanfic for sure!

No matter how in love I was, I'd never ever drop out of school if my boyfriend of a few MONTHS asked me to. Bitch be crazy *nods* Also, like you said I can't decide if I like Sam in this or not...

WTF I HAVEN'T COMMENTED ON THIS EITHER? Damn, I suck.
Anywho, Sam McTrusty is so hot. Holy shit. I was stalking him on the tumblr search yesterday (no shame) and I jizzed, man.
You write wonderfully. <3

I adore what Sam and Sierra have!
They are both adorable and I can see how much they adore each other.
But it seems that their happy days are going to be coming to an end.
And how much weird will things get for Sierra and Sam.
Wow so a year long tour with her boyfriend?????
And now we find out that Sierra is telling that agreeing to go on tour with him is one of the biggest mistakes she makes in her life.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aw they're perfect for each other. :>

I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm so readyy for the ride we're gonna take with this story! can't wait for the update. :)

So I fucking love this story, just for your information. I completely love Sierra, and even with her bad decisions, I love her personality. Besides, that man is much too hot for someone to be able to think properly around. I mean really. But I cannot wait for shit to hit the fan! I know it's going to be good. Though I love Sam and Sierra right now, so I'm kind of sad that you know shit gets fucked up! But I still cannot wait for more! Haha.
Update again soon please!!

JOHN OH OR DAN OR HARRY.
because John and Dan are just SUPER attractive
but Harry 'cause I'm not too obsessed with 1D but he's adorbz and has a super nice voice, so.
BUT OH MY GOD,
poor Sierra :c
that last line foreshadowed so much.
just thought I'd let you know.
so, in turn, I'm super excited for the coming chapters and will be pestering you to update, as I usually do on most of your stories c;

Sam is so hot in this chapter. Fuck.
I was unbearably excited when I started reading because then I discovered that it was a new chapter that you haven't sent me, so it was quite the experience to be reading it for the first time! The fact that Jamie has "heard things" about Sam should have been a red flag for Sierra, but just like I would do in reality, she defends him as though she is the beauty and he is her beast: ugly to everyone else except for her, even though he has made it pretty clear that he is not a good guy. (Oh god, you should have a Beauty and the Beast fantasy chapter! Just a thought).

Also, I imagined Sam sitting on the couch in a shirt and boxers with a blunt between his lips and now I have a boner. And JESUS CHRIST. If he started singing a Circa song for me I would lose all control. I'm seriously losing it over the thought. GOD. Regardless of him being a bad choice for her and starting what will be a dysfunctional relationship, they are so cute together. And him calling her sweetheart all the time just makes me swoon.

...Did I just say "swoon"? Shit, I'm fangirling over here and I need to stop and try to deliver a comment that holds some water. What I'm trying to tell you is that I really love this story because you make it dark but not entirely pitch black. It's fucked up but it's not overwhelmingly so. It's the right balance between two completely opposite concepts: Disaster and fairy tale. It's such a joy to read.

As I write this comment I'm rereading the chapter, and I've reached the scene where his friends interrupt their sexy time. DAMMIT BOYS. But Sam calling Sierra his girlfriend is already a slight indicator at his possessive and dominant personality. They obviously never discussed it, and here he is announcing his decision to make her his. Interesting. Or I could be overanalyzing, which I tend to do about 90% of the time.

God, I'm just super excited for the next chapter!!!!

UM EXCUZE MI
SAM COULD BE THE WOLF AND I'D STILL THINK HE WAS PRINCE CHARMING.
I love him so much it hurts, oh god c':
and omfg
his raging boner when the dean yelled at him
I AM DYING.
so please update soon? ;D

I really enjoy the bantering back and forth. It isn't all sweetness, and that's what makes it enjoyable. I wonder if there will be any fallout from the designation of girlfriend. Can't wait for more!

That really must be a surprise for his friends, finding out that he is living with a girl that he proclaims that is his girlfriend.
Because his friends know how he is; hearing and seeing him with a girl that seems to mean more to him than the random one night stands he usually has, really must be a shock for them.
I'm stuck in between because in this chapter, Sam is such a sweetheart and I just swoon when he sang to Sierra.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really freaking love this story! I love how Sam keeps changing so we don't really know if he's a good guy or not. But I am in love with him! And I also completely love Sierra. Their interactions are just really freaking adorable in this chapter! I cannot wait for more girl!
Update again soon please!!!

Sam is so.. ugh. I don't know. Damn this story. Update soon!

hey! I used to be An Ode to Maybe but I had to delete for reasons but I just remade and wanted to check out your stories again, and omfg this made me so excited I think I screamed. I love the idea so much and Twin Atlantic has been one of my favorite bands ever since I saw them on their ymas tour.
This will be the first story I subscribe to on my new account. Yay! :3

Ugh dude, you already know how I feel about this chapter and all your other writing. You're making this story out to be really dark and I'm enjoying the fuck out of it. Sam is so mysterious and Sierra seems to be ahead in the game in her actions, but I have a notion that he is going to throw her a curveball and she's going to be left vulnerable and unknowing of what to do.

BUT who knows, what is she's the one to do that to him?
So many possibilities for this story!!!!

And your rhyming was great I don't know what you're talking about.

I really fucking love Sierra (obviously) and her sense of humour (also obviously haha). She's hilarious, and how she treats Sam, especially after knowing he's just banged some girl, made me laugh out loud. Sam and Sierra's little moment in the cafe was actually adorable though, even knowing that he's probably not good for her. But I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Update again soon please!!

I'm glad she's giving him a chance but it's probably a bad idea. Even though Sam is super attractive, it doesn't seem like he's a prince charming.