The Greatest Lie. - Comments

Yay she finally gave him a chance. Exciting!

OHMYGOD THIS IS SO FLAWLESS
I CAN'T EVEN.
Sam McTrusty's so sexy. just gah.
please update soon c:

So Sam a manwhore? lol
Because he can't even remember the girl he was with the night before.
So this story has both a fairy tale and a twisted version of that fairy tale between Sam and Sierra.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This chapter was great. All the flirting. Ugh girl, give Sam a chance. I didn't quite understand the last part. Eh, I'll just find out in the next chapter. Update soon!

Not going to lie I was definitely a bit confused at the end with the video and her laptop, but fuck I loved this update! I really am in love with this story, especially the interactions between Sierra and Sam. I cannot wait for more of that. I actually just cannot wait to see all the drama that you've been foreshadowing man, I know this is going to be such a good story!
Update again soon please!

I can tell that Sam does not like getting shot down by girl he tries to seduce!
I wonder when things will start to get very dramatic between the two of them!
I am very excited for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh my goodness.
you, miss, are amazing.
SAM MCTRUSTY IS SO ALKSDJCHLAKSJDFHL.
omfg lusty rhymes with trusty which is part of McTrusty which is part of SAM MCTRUSTY.
just thought I'd say.
uh, yeah.


awh, look at that chest hair. look at it c:

so uh, please update soon? (:

I really like how you're combining fairy tale with reality. It's just enough of both to keep us guessing for a bit :) Update soon please?

The changes you've made to this since I last read it have really enriched the chapter. Especially the ending where she is being hypnotized by her laptop screen and Sam's spirit is calling her over towards it. That just takes his character/their relationship to a much more sinister and fucked-up level, and I LOVE IT. And I can see that you've worded it up a bit, which is always a plus.

Even with all the mind control and alcohol, Sierra stayed strong while he was trying his best to influence her, and I have to say that I'm impressed (because if it really was me all he'd have to do is say 'hello' and I'd be all his for the taking).

Incredible, as always and glad to be a part of it!

I have a feeling that this is the start of a very complicated relationship.

Amazing first chapter!
I can't wait to see where this goes, its an amazing first chapter as just leaves you wanting more!
It's surprising to see a Twin Atlantic story on here!
And it's even cooler that I live an hour away from where they were brought up!

You started it! Ahhhh! I am so in love already, I am loving this fairy tale and reality mixture. I cannot wait to see where you go with this! And obviously I love Sierra already! Haha.
Also, "She had to look away. Looking at him was like looking directly into the sun." This totally reminded me about how we kept talking about how we can't look directly at him because he's too pretty! Haha. I cannot wait for more girl!
Update again soon please!

The beginning was great. I'm excited for this!

Oh my goodness, this first chapter was wonderful. I'm so excited for this story. Seriously, I was excited before you posted anything because your stories are always good but the first chapter has me hooked.

AIJALSIJA;SDLEI this is literally perfection and it seems like it's going to be really dark, so i'm wicked excited, update soon! <3

OMG I love first few paragraphs!
The way you wrote just so mind boggling because you can just dive right in and imagine the whole scene.
So this story is going to very angst because Sam in this story is the wolf in sheep clothing as she said, now it seems that she should have ran the other way when she first met him.
Because he is a rock star with limitless amount of booze, drugs and sex with different types of women while going on tour.
I can't definitely see that Sam is very cocky and confident.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this already ^_^

I can't wait to read more. You know how excited I am for this story.

I already love this so much, omfg.
I AM DYING HERE.
and Sam McTrusty's a total sweetheart, tho :c
LOLOL SORRY IF THERE ARE TYPOS. on my iTouch, sooooooo...
but yeah.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

I'm really intrigued by this, especially the start with the fairytale. Can't wait to see where you take this!