What We Left Unsaid - Comments

by the way whats the sequel called because I couldn't find it to subscribe.

after and epilogue like that which was amazing by the way I don't know what to say! really bummed she had to die but it had to happen to make those fools wake up and I hope they regret how they treated her. tho i really am going to miss her and wish she wasn't the one that had to die.

Oh. My. God.
Whhyyyy?!?!
I couldnt help but cry at the last chapter. :(
I can't wait to start reading the sequel!

I honestly want to be mad at you right now but i don't think i can be lol. i'm extremely upset that she's dead i really am but i'm really happy i found a story that took me on some sort of emotional rollercoaster. those are the best type of stories after all so i have nothing to complain about. you'r such an amasing write love.

I really did love this story and i know when ever the sequel starts, i'll be so excited but for now i'll just wai here.

I'm likin pouring my eyes out right now like I can't believe she is gone and all becuz Zacky wanted to be stubborn and hard headed and not tell the guys which room Ava is in, my heart is so broken I can't even piece it together right now, this story was amazing u had me on my toes through the entire thing I seriously can't wait to read the sequel :)

Holy. Shit. Ava fucking died in the blast or the bomb or whatever it was! I can't fucking- they were supposed to make up and be together forever at the end! I'm just so blown away. The epilogue was really emotional and great.

Overall, I'm really glad I found this story. I wished that eventually Ava and Zack would have gotten together, but the way you played the whole thing out was amazing. It was something that we would have all liked to happen, but was better that it didn't. I'm really sad to see the story end, but I can't wait to see what's in store for Zack in the future.

I'm sad to see it end but ready for the sequel!

To be honest im dissapointedand bummed out about this ending. This sucks.

OMG!!!! I'm crying so hard right now but I knew it wasn't going to end good when Zacky wouldn't tell them where the room was and when the lights went out. Wow I can't even wrap my mind on what has just happened... I can't believe Ava's gone. I want it to be a trick or something to make Drake and the other's think she's dead but I don't think it is. Tho this was truly and awesome story I'm sad to see it go and you are an awesome writer... I so excited to see what going to happen in the squeal...

I don't even know what to say... that was heartbreaking! I could picture them all, but the way you described Zacky...

Truly amazing story I know I've said it before but it really was. It's hard to find a story that captures my attention this way. You put such an emotional roller coaster in this that it was hard to stay away!

I'm definately looking forward to the sequel..though as much as I bitched about Ava, I'm still sad she's gone.

T.T Nope. I'm not okay with this ending, but it is very well done. I cant wait to read the sequel.

I'm so emotional over this chapter. Again, mindfucked. Just when I think the chapter is going one way, NOPE. Something entirely different. I need to stop having all of these expectations of how things are going to pan out for each character.

And then with Zack at the end. RIGHT IN THE HEART. I just feel like I have more questions than answers at this point! Like I want to know what happened between the explosion and when the epilogue took place. Even though you warned us up front that this wasn't the story of a fairtytale romance, I kind of pulled for Zacky and Ava to find some sort of positive common ground throughout the story. I wish, more than anything, Zacky would have had the chance to talk to Ava after learning she didn't really know about the note.

Part of me still wants to hold onto the idea that Ava isn't really dead. It's always hard to believe that an important figure in a story is gone, especially when you've rooted for them since the beginning. But I'm so excited/curious to see how Zacky reacts to all of this. I know he's harbored a lot of hate towards her, rightfully so, but after everything that's happened it's got to hurt. Really bad. Ava, afterall, was his mate. And I'm sure losing a mate is probably one of the worst things their kind could endure. But now the title of the story makes sense to me. So many things left unsaid between Ava and Zacky. I can only hope that in the sequel (which maybe it will be uncovered that Ava is still alive. Never losing hope on that! haha) we find out a little more about the two of them. I just don't want to believe this is the end of Zacky and Ava.

But I have loved every bit of this story, from start to finish (although the ending is frustrating to accept!) You are a brilliant writer and I cannot wait to see what happens in the sequel!

Well now the title of the story really seems fitting. Zacky just knelt there, in front of the stone with her name on it, in silence. There is so much left unsaid between them. But rather than say anything he left them unsaid and just knelt there silence.

It took me going back and rereading that last little bit to realize that.

I really hate you for killing Ava right now....I hope some witches or something come into the story and bring her back or something, Her and her mate never got to speak to each other after the truth came out :'( ....I don't even know what to think, when it said trajedy it thought it meant something else...im so...I don't even know how to feel right now. That's not what I wanted to happen :"""(

I haven't even gotten two whole paragraphs in and I'm already crying! WHAT THE FUCK!!! I don't even like Ava damn it! I don't even know if she is dead or alive yet and I'm fucking crying! I HATE YOU!

So I walk away thinking that when I come back to finish reading I'll be fine (I didn't even finish reading Johnny's story before I walked away! FUCKING BRIAN!) and I was for the most part. That was till I got to Matt! Now I'm fucking crying again!

Just so you know I really hate this! That's all I can say. I never wanted her to die! I may have hated her but I am absolutely crushed to find out that she is gone.

Oh God! What is going to happen to Zacky now?!?! The guys will never forgive him. But forget the guys for a minute; will Zee ever be able to forgive himself? Seriously though WHY?!?! Why did you do this, as if he hasn’t been through enough now he has to lose his mate, and live with the guilt that he was completely wrong about her, and that if he had just listened to Brian she may still be alive.

Wow, I had to take the majority of the night to catch up and stopped reading just before the epilogue to lay in bed and cry for a while. My poor dude was so confused and tried his best to keep up with me when I attempted to explain the story to him. That ending was absolutely heartbreaking and everyone standing around her grave, sharing their stories... That fucking killed me. Poor Kat made my heart twist because, god damn, she acted the way most women do when they're not feeling so confident about meeting a lovers best female friend. I know the feel all too well! Ugh and poor Zacky must feel like such a little shit! This story ha made me laugh, cry, yell at the characters in frustration while shaking my fist... Sorry I haven't commented in a while... Shit has gone down... But know that this has (so far) been the only story on mibba that's made me feel this way in a long while.

I refuse to believe that she's dead! She can't be! But on a serious note, I remember that I started reading this story when it had like ten chapters and I can't believe what it has become. The ending hit me like a ton of bricks but I can't wait to read the sequel. Thank you for always replying to my comments. Not many writers do that. :D

I loved the whole story but the ending was so sad :( I really looked forward to getting an update on this story so much that I would make sure I could read it on the way to school because it was just that amazing. I look forward to the sequel <3

Noooo she can't die!!! I'm seriously crying right now! I dislike that she has passed!!
Every time I got an e-mail about an update on this story I would get so happy. Your writing is amazing and the story was wonderful and I am truly sad to see it come to an end. But am excited to read how Zacky continues to go on.

NOO AVA BEAR WHY DID IT HAVE TO B THIS WAY