Only Liars, But We're The Best - Comments

I was sent here by Live_Love_Lie. I like so far. She has a crush on her step brother well thats intersting. I love the layout but I have to change it to the default because i cant read it in the font you have it in.

This is so good! :) I have a weakness for a little less sixteen candles stories, and I can tell that this one is gonna be really amazing. Just one thing - You might want to change up the font of the layout. It's a bit hard to read, especially with eyes like mine. But besides that, I can't see anything else wrong! Update again soon!

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I let such a fan girly scream when Pete came in. It was totally worth the look I got from my brother. Just… I thought it was funny with the bags under Pete's eyes. It could be from sleep…could be from old eyeliner. Oh so funny:D

I love you too! Writing another chapter for my story now…going to promote this one <3

YAY! New chapter :) Very awesome.

I loved how Mai has the small flashbacks, so we get a little piece of her past. And yeah, Ryan is exactly like a drama queen!

Time to see the rest of the guys! oohhh I'm excited :D I want to see Trick, and Pete so bad!

Can't wait for the next part!

I honestly adore this story right now. Can't wait to read more.

Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa! Mai is friends with Ryan? As in Mr. Ross? She's so lucky, it's not fair!

LOVED IT! I liked how you kept to Pete's childhood; the soccer, Arma, the dreadlocks, boot camp. Oh that was awesome :D And how you mentioned his body and drooling. Oh yes, how true that statement was.

And wow, Mai is a dirty girl, crushing on her step brother. I cannot wait to see more! And you mentioned this was 16 candles world, right? Ahh! She's crushing on her step brother who might be a vampire! The drama!

When I put my next chapter up for my fic, I'll link this. It might get you more readers. Loved the layout by the way! <3