Tragic Flaw. - Comments

Sara needs to die. Poor Erika :( Max is a proper jerk .-. hope you'll update soon! xx

Yeah yeah Sara is a bitch. My goodness I need more of this story.

i absolutely adore this story. i find Erika really relateable and i really like the way this is going so far, keep it up love :) xx

I agree with littleedeath and hachie. Sarah needs to catch an STD and die! *rageragerage*

Could you possibly just kill of Sara, shes a bitch. Oh Max is really pissing me off right now., like how tf you gonna treat your exgirlfriend like that. I'm totally with hachie on this, Max would be pissed af if Erika went prancing around showing off her boyfriend who was his exbestfriend who he promised he wouldn't get with. And poor Erika getting put in an awkward situation and Max not helping the problem at all. But seriously though you should just let Sara get crushed by a double decker bus.

I completely agree with you about Sara being a bitch! But I believe she is a boyfriend stealing whore that seems to take what she wants no matter who she hurts in the process. She tries to act like the victim but she isn't! So Max broke his promise to Erika that he would never want Sara but now he is screwing her and showing her off. I am not on Max's side at all because he is complete asshole that gets a disease from his whore of a girlfriend! I wonder how Max would feel if he saw Erika with one his ex best friend. Then he would know how it feels from Erika's place. I can't wait for the next update!

Poor Erika! :(

I want Sara to accidentally run into a knife and bleed to death. Sorry bit much there but you know. I don't like her at all.

What are you doing to my emotions??
The whole Max being a jerk to Erika made me upset for her and Sara just makes me
wanna punch her.

i want to push max and sara off a cliff, haha i feel so bad for erika :(

max needs to stop being a twat and sara can burn in hell but I really really love this!

I love this story.

Okay I love Max but what a twat. And his new 'girlfriend' needs to be shot. I would never get with my best friends ex without asking if it was okay with her first.

Awh awh so so cute. You go Max!

Super cute chapter. I love these flashback chapters. Looking forward to the next one.

Did the guys seriously have to come in at that point? They ruined a perfect moment.

Max is a sweetheart! cant wait for the next one :) x

Aw how sweeeet! Cant wait for next chapter x

So Sara is jealous of Erika because of her personalty is the complete opposite of hers. Erika doesn't flaunt herself off, she's very conserve but when it comes to Max, she is different person. So I am guessing that Max is probably using Sara as a rebound or something because he found her hot not beautiful and he could tell that she is heartbreaker! I wonder what secrets will unveiled. I can't wait for the next update!

This is amazing. Can't wait for another update!! :)