Tragic Flaw. - Comments

I can't wait for the next!

I'm so damn confused omg I bet Max follows her

Looooooooooooooooove this story. Favorite one you've ever written!

i love this way to much! i literally screamed when he punched the mirror omfg its perfect. i just neeeed to know why they spilt! its killing me i

With things going slow, it kind of builds up the mystery to this story. I'm quite in love with it. Especially with the flashbacks of how they met, it's all too sweet.

I think i prefer this story going slow, you're not skipping anything and it makes me anticipate the next chapter more. Im thinking Max is in denial and it was more towards his fault, cant wait for next update! X

I don't Max is trying to come to terms that her leaving was a huge blame on himself, he is too stubborn to see it. He is just placing the blame on her because she walked out on him but she did with good reasons. He was becoming someone she didn't know and she tried countless times to make their relationship work but he is the one that fucked up big time. I just wish he would stop thinking about himself for once and realize from Erika's point of view and why she left. I can't wait for the next update!

Erika drove 7 hours just to see him play? That's adorable. I hate that they are the way they are now because it's obvious that they used to really be in love. I'm dying to know what happened between them.

Woah, what the hell happened between those two?

Woah, what the hell happened between those two?

can't wait for the next update aahh!

can't wait for the next update aahh!

Ah, foreign boys. They are the best and their accents make me have to change my underwear every time they speak. Can't wait for July :)

I love how you've approached this story. It's always kind of difficult to think outside the box and keep switching from present to past because you really have to know what you're doing and keep things planned out, which you obviously have. I love the way they met though, even if it is cliche, it was so adorably written and made me feel all bubbly inside. Max is such a cutie and Erika is so shy that it just makes for a great scene. My favorite part of the whole chapter was how clever you made the transition from when Max was getting his tattoo to their first meeting: both started with one person calling the other a pussy and it was just funny :)

I'm so ready to see the whole story unfold because I honestly can't even figure it out, but that's what I love about it. You've got me addicted girl :)

The way they met was adorable and I definitely agree with you....why can't that actually happen?! I don't care if it's completely cliche, I'll take it haha

"Where's my cute English boys at?! God knows I love me some foreign boys." Oh girl don't we all!!! Hahahaha. But soon!
I freaking love this story, and how you're showing the present mixed in with the past. To show how they got to here, where they can't even be in the same room. They were so cute though! I love their first meeting, and how awkward but adorable it was. It makes me even more sad that they are hating each other now. I cannot wait for more girl, I love this story!
Update again soon please!!

That flashback was sooo adorable! :D

Aw the flashback of them meeting was adorable! So no matter what Max will always hold a soft spot in her heart because he can bring her down with just one gaze. And she fears that he could find his way into her heart again and then break it. I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really liked this chapter!

update soon ? :)

update soon ? :)