Tragic Flaw. - Comments

Can't wait for more !

This story is crazy good, you've got me so curious about everything! I just need to know more! Erika and Max were so adorable when they first met, I cannot get over it. But I need to know what happened to get them where they are now! Their heartbreak is just so depressing. I cannot wait for more! Haha.
Update again soon please!!!

Max and Erika are just so adorable. Is Sara the slut that's now dating Max? I'm going to guess she is.

aw this is so cute!!! can't wait for the next one :) xx

Yup her friend is definitely a slut! I mean she flirts shamelessly when she first met Max and Erika can definitely see the the attraction between them but that doubt was squished when Max paid attention to her only. I also feel that Erika somehow was overshadowed by her friend because of her personality. I can't wait for the next update!

They are so perfect, why doesnt this happen to me?! I seriously envy fictional characters what even... Gimme more! X

They are so perfect, why doesnt this happen to me?! I seriously envy fictional characters what even... Gimme more! X

They are just so cute omg what happened?

Why can't they just stay like this?! I don't think I'm prepared for what is ahead! Haha.

this drama is making me crave for the next chapter!!! please update!!!! :)

Im thinking max cheated on erika and his current girlfriend is her best friend who he cheated with. Cant wait for all this drama! X

:( No bueno...

Did Max cheat on Erika?! If so why the fudge is he so pissed that she left. He got what he deserved.

So... Max's girlfriend was Erika's friend (best friend, possibly?) and she and Max slept together while Erika and Max dated. Erika found out, dumped Max, and left England. Max and that girl started dating..... That's my guess on the situation. Update soon so I can see if I'm close! Hahah (:

So I am guessing that Max's new "girlfriend" did something to Erika to make her hate her so much. I am getting that she probably slept with one of Erika's previous boyfriend before Max and then started to date him. Man I am so confused but I am dying to find out more! I can't wait for the next update! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

So I am guessing that Max's new "girlfriend" did something to Erika to make her hate her so much. I am getting that she probably slept with one of Erika's previous boyfriend before Max and then started to date him. Man I am so confused but I am dying to find out more! I can't wait for the next update! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

So I am guessing that Max's new "girlfriend" did something to Erika to make her hate her so much. I am getting that she probably slept with one of Erika's previous boyfriend before Max and then started to date him. Man I am so confused but I am dying to find out more! I can't wait for the next update! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is so good and well written and I'm dying because I need an explanation but in a good way

I'm still confused. There's some ideas in my head but I think they're all wrong. But I'm loving this.

I'm confused, but I love how you write and can't wait to understand a little bit more! :) xx