Tragic Flaw. - Comments

I'm fucking in love with this story, it's so intense already I'm DYING. I don't even know what to feel about these two, but I need them to have a conversation or yelling match or something! Haha. But their first seeing of each other was so intense and sad. Girl, I need more! Haha. I cannot wait for more of this story!
Update again soon please!!!

Love love LOVE this story :) Can't wait to figure out what went down with Max and Erika!

I have no clue how I completely missed this story. I was subscribed to it and everything but am just now reading it. Anyway, there is definitely some unresolved issues between Erika and Max so I can't wait for the drama that will ensue as they try to work everything out.

So Max knows that Erika is back and that she knows that he is with someone else,
So now he is just sad because all the feelings he once had came rushing back.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Max is seems like an asshole in this story, oh well. Can't wait to see what goes down (:

I'm so curious now. What's happening? Update soon please!

omfg. i love this story! update ASAP ! :)

So I already love this story because I already feel emotionally attached to Erika. I'm not entirely sure why haha, but I love her. I think it's because I just feel so sad for her. I just want to know more about her and Max's relationship and why it was so fucked up. I cannot wait for more girl!
Update again soon please!!

I have a feeling that this is going to be a lot of back and forth and confusion. That this story is going to be a lot bigger than expected, and I'm in the front row ready for the big drop. It holds a lot of potential, especially in the newest chapter. Can't say much right now since it just started, but I can say that Max and Erika have a pretty fucked up relationship, and going off of what I know at this point, I don't know if it can be resolved. BUT, who knows. I'm just ready for more shit to hit the fan!

So I take it that Max got over her and moved on to another girl.
You know that makes me very angry even though Erika left.
Her leaving was his fault because he kept pushing her away until she couldn't take it anymore.
He is definitely going to shit his pants when his sees her again.
I hope he feels like an asshole because with his attitude he was the one that destroyed the relationship he once had with Erika.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who is Desiree marrying? I'm so curious. I can't wait for the next chapter!

An intense beginning. Oh no, this is gonna make me cry is it? :/ although those to me, those stories are usually the best to read for some reason. Ha, but I'm ready to see this story take off! :)

Looking forward to it, im already hooked x

Oh girl, I'm already in love!!! The drama! I cannot wait for more, you've already gotten me hooked! And of course, I love Max haha.
Update again soon please!!!

Sounds awesome!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

OMG the first chapter just made want to cry!
It seems that Max didn't realize what he had with Erika would end so suddenly.
And ti be honest it was his fault because all he wanted to do was party and get wasted with his friends instead of taking care of his girlfriend that did everything make them happy!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So stoked for this story :)

Aw, my relationship ended with Max. Me crys :'(

I'm sorry mibba deleted everything, that sucks bro. I like the beginning already, sounds like its gonna be a great story. keep up the good work :)

I love the beginning. Your writing is just great. Always good. Update soon please!