Marvel Her Beauty - Comments

Comment swap! I'm glad I got this. It's descriptive, well thought out and and intriguing. The layout is fantastic! There aren't too many X-Men stories and this is a good one :) Although I will not subscribe because X-Men really isn't my thing, I will recommend it because it's very impressive.

Wow, so beautifully, amazingly descriptive. First class (ahem, excuse the pun) spelling and grammar.

There aren't many X-Men fics out there, so yay! The fandom thanks you. I love that your chapters are a decent length. Kudos.

Keep writing! x

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After reading your story, the only feedback I can probably give you is to give more detail. Explain your characters a little bit more. I do like your hook at the beginning as it really draws the reader in!

Keep up the good work and keep writing!!

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After reading your story, the only feedback I can probably give you is to give more detail. Explain your characters a little bit more. I do like your hook at the beginning as it really draws the reader in!

Keep up the good work and keep writing!!

LOVE X-Men, haven't had a chance to see X-Men first class yet so I skimmed through the first chapter a little afraid I'd get spoiled. But I'm going to bookmark this and come back once I've watched the movie. Looking forward to seeing where this leads!

Wow, this is one of the most well written fics I've seen on here. Though my writing style is very casual and is simplified to tell an everyday story, I adore writing like this. Maybe I can make a side story of mine and adapt more of this style! Subscribing! Love X-Men, by the way!

Sent by the comment swap :3 I've never hear of an X-men fan fiction but this was pretty good. Your writing is impeccable and very well executed. It's graceful and hits all the right tones. Keep up the good work! :)

I love the layout of this story. It's beautiful and perfect but I don't feel that it quite fits the tone of an X-Men story.

I can't say I've ever read an X-Men fan fiction before but I'm impressed by yours. You have a rather wonderful way with words and perfect punctuation. The first chapter really pulls the reader in and boy, if I read movie/book fan fictions, I would continue with this but I sadly can't bring myself to.

This is brilliant though.
Real brilliant.

I'm from the comment swap, and I read the first chapter. It's a really good concept! You made the characters all really deep. I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes so you're good there. Your writing is amazing. Keep up the good work!

@ anima d'amore;;
Yeah, I've decided to do my own series with an Orginal Character, and I planned this when First Class came out but I just wasn't confident enough at first. Now I'm excited to write the other books and soon I'll finish this :)

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I was so excited to see an X-Men fanfiction story! You have great spelling and grammar, at least no errors I could really see. I love the X-Men, but I think I'm just so in love with the original characters that this was hard for me to get into. Best of luck!

hey! so comment swap brought me here! so let me start off with i only read the first chapter, (mostly because i was interrupted by forces off screen) and i love x-men!!

i havent found a writer with talent that liked x-men on mibba before now!! i love the use of descriptive words and the pattern of the background.

my only confusion is; is this some kind of twisted spin off from the cuban missile crisis Shaw created??

Hi there. Comment swap sent me here. So, I really have no clue about X-Men whatsoever, so this story wasn't exactly for me. But, you definitely kept my interest throughout the story, which is very important. It never got boring. Your writing skills are great. Absolutely amazing. I think you should definitely keep up the good work!

Sorry, comment swap sent me here again.

Hi there. Comment swap sent me here. So, I really have no clue about X-Men whatsoever, so this story wasn't exactly for me. But, you definitely kept my interest throughout the story, which is very important. It never got boring. Your writing skills are great. Absolutely amazing. I think you should definitely keep up the good work!

Hiya, from comment swap here. I have to say, I don't really enjoy Marvel comics and I don't know much about them, therefore I haven't seen or know anything about X-Men. I couldn't get into the story and I felt very confused. I can't say I enjoyed it myself, but it's understandable if you're not in the fandom. But, it was very well written and you should carry on writing. Good job!

Commetn wap brought me here adn i mustsay it is aninteresting take on the marvel comics....over all it was very good and i hope you keep it up!!! add some more detail and just keep on writing. youll only improve with practice!!!!! =)

Your way with words is absolutely brilliant. Your descriptions are short but have enough detail to put the writer right into the story. Even though I am not a big Marvel fan, I couldn't stop reading the descriptions. Comment swap has made me fall more in love with Mibba and the fantastic writers on here.

I was a tad confused as to what was happening in the story. I mean I didn't understand what was attacking her and what she was fighting off. That probably was intentional but I would throw us a little more discription. That's just me. I like xmen (other than all the flack they get from the very crappy marvel universe average human beings). But good job otherwise. Good luck and may the pen be ever in your favor.

Little me from Comment Swap:)
Just realized that you actually commented on one of my stores xD So that was funny,now I get to comment on one of yours.Well I really like the layout,it's red and black,my favorite colors :) The banner scared me a bit but not for a bad reason.I was reading the summary and saw it move so I though I was going crazy but I wasn't so I'm alright now.I'm not really and X-Men fan but I like your writing,as said in other comments.Keep it up:)

Comment Swap; I've never seen anything to do with X-Men but I seriously liked this story and your style of writing. I didn't get much of the story line but it was easy to read and enjoyable none the less, continue writing though because you're good at getting your point across.