Marvel Her Beauty - Comments

I'm a major comic book nerd at heart and I loved watching the X-Men cartoons as a kid and the movies are fantastic. That being said, I've never read an X-Men fanfiction before, but... wow, this story is just breath-taking. Words cannot describe how much I love this. Your writing style is just amazing and I'm honestly quite jealous. This is just... great. I love it. Keep it up, kid :)

Okay, so I've never even seen X-Men, but I am in love with your story. You are a great writer, and you describe things beautifully. I wouldn't care if you were writing about unicorns on drugs, I would still read it. Your writing is fantastic, please don't stop. Ever. :D

I was obsessed with the X-Men at one point so this is a bit interesting to me (Comment Swap brought me here) my brother is obsessed with it do I can always ask him for help. Anyways your story sounds great! No errors and it sounds well written ( not like the fan fic I write, twilight what do you expect XD ) the way you describe things makes me want to write better! So thank you for the inspiration! And don't quit writing you are amazing!

I was so jazzed when I saw this was an X-Men story. Absolutely effing love it. Your character, Ginger, is so interesting, and you describe things beautifully. Some of the lines you've written are worded so fabulously, that I read them over a couple times. Definitely subscribing, and I can't wait for more!

Let me be totally honest with you-I know nothing about X-Men. My dad has always tried to get me into it, but I never cracked and watched it with him. Let me say something you might not want to hear-I have no clue what's going on xD I'm not sure if that's because it's 12AM and I'm not processing anything or what! But, I can definatlly tell you're a great writer! And to go on about your writing, I high encourage you to explain this to me so I can be coming back for more! (: I wish I understood the story line a little more, because then I'd be able to give you the best reveiw in the world! I think sometime I'll go and watch and learn everything I possibly can about the X-Men so I can be a loved reader like most people are! If I liked, loved, enjoyed, whatever! The X-Men, then I'd totally be back for more! But, again, I feel a little lost >.< Anyway, keep writing because someone out there will be head over heels in love with your story! I wish you the best of luck!
-Kaitlynn, Comment Swap "Bit By Bit"

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Oh wow! A X-Man story! I was so happy when I saw this come! I have been wanting to get involved with that part of Marvel for the longest time. YAY! Anyways, I loved the fic. I think it's really pretty awesome, and very interesting, for sure! It's different. Which I love. I love the way you write it's very easy going, and paces it's self very well. :) Keep doing a great job. :) Although I believe I have commented, multiple times, it's still telling me I have to comment and stuff. I don't know. BUT, I did recommend and subscribe for sure! It's truly amazing what you've got going on here. And I've notice lots of people have been commenting, which is very very very good. ;) I enjoyed your writing. Please update soon!

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For a first piece of work, I think this is remarkable. I do follow the X-Men universe, but can't really consider myself a fan as I don't know too much of them. I'm just a fan of Marvel comic book superheroes in general.

You're pretty detailed, which I myself can't really write as I suck in being descriptive -.-

I only read the first chapter, so this comment is based on that chapter.

Comment swap brought me here. I'm not a x-men fan at all but I thought the story so far is pretty good. I thought it was well written and a few grammar mistakes but I can't complain there because I suck at grammar. I'll be recommending and subsribe to it. Can't wait for more. <3

This is great, I love x-men. I'll be reading more of youre stuff. :]

I love X-Men and First class is my favorite film in the series. I think that your story and character, Ginger, are very intresting. The saws she has, along with her will to survive, make her fun to read. The opening action in the first chapter is the perfect thing to get a reader's attention and keep them hooked.

One thing that I think airbus improve your writing is watching your grammer. I notice a lot of run on sentences that make it hard to read. Style wise, I think that it's great, but breaking up sentences won't take away from the message you want to get across.

comment swap directed me here! :) I'm not a huge x-men fan, but I do watch the movies, granted, I haven't seen all of them. THis story is really well written and you managed to describe the details very well. :) There are a couple of grammar mistakes, but otherwise, everything is good! Keep up the good work :)

Comment swap directed me here too. I like this story though, it's really good. (:

comment swap directed me here and although i'm not really into the whole X-men series, but this story really well written and very interesting. You're concepts were very interesting and you explained the whole series very well. It's a very good story and very well written. Keep up the good work.

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The original X-men movies are some of my favorite Marvel movies. Though I must admit I haven't seen the First Class movie yet, I enjoyed reading about the years before the school and how you managed to incorporate some parts/details of the movies in the story. Ginger is definitely an interesting character. I've only read the first two chapters, but it will be interesting to see how she develops further.

Grammar wise, this story could be a little better. It's not that you write bad, but you make a lot of their/there mistakes and in the first chapter there sometimes appear capital letters on random words, where they shouldn't be. You should also try to write in shorter sentences in my opinion. For example in the second chapter, the second to last paragraph is nine lines long and the first two sentences each take up more than three lines. It gets hard to follow when there are so many comma's in one sentence.

So aside from a little grammatical trouble, this story is definitely interesting! Keep up the good work!

Hi comment swap brought me here, this story is fantastic. I love X-men and to be honest I believe anyone that doesn't would still understand it as you explained it very well. Keep up the good writing and update soon please xx

Hi comment swap brought me to this and this story is really good I love X- men and I think even if you weren't a fan you would understand it well since you explained it really well xxx

Comment swap brought me here. :)
I really liked how you used the concept of mutants. It makes the story so fasiinating.

Hi comment swap brought me to this and i really enjoyed the first chapter, & i think you explained this really well! and i think that for anyone who doesnt know much about X-Men they would understand it very well :) keep it up!

Hi comment swap brought me to this and i really enjoyed the first chapter, & i think you explained this really well! and i think that for anyone who doesnt know much about X-Men they would understand it very well :) keep it up!

Hey, comment swap sent me here :) I'm not an X-Men fan but I think you explained it all pretty well. I didn't see any punctuation errors which is good because I hate stories that are just full of them, and then that really puts me off reading it. Anyway, good work, keep it up! :D