Beautiful. Wonderful. And any other word that ends in -ful. I loved this story start to finish! I actually love the fact that you did not give a back story right away, but instead filled us in as it went. Ty and B were outstanding; I live that they aren't perfect or even good for one another but so in love that it doesn't matter! hgfdsalkj just... Overall a great story.
so sad that this is over. i thought this story was beautifully written, had an original plot line, and a fabulous ending! i loved every bit of it, which startled me cuz when i first started reading this i wasnt sure to stick with it, but i am sooo glad i did because it was amazing! great job writing this! and the ending was perfect! GREAT JOB!
I'm so so so sad that it's over! But I'm so glad it exists and that you exist and that you're such an amazing writer!! I can't remember if I've recommended you and this story but I'm going to now! :)
I love this story. It's my favorite story on this site, no joke :) I'm so glad you decided to put it out here and I'm ecstatic that you're working on another! I can't wait for it :)
You. Are. Flawless. Amazing job, this story was phenominal and wonderful and I loved everything about it. Keep up the writing, and don't be afraid to even do your own. So much of this story was original ideas, that I feel like an original work by you would be a great read. Keep it up.
some part of me really wanted them to be together; because all they've known is each other and it's always been B an Tyler. but another part of me dislikes tyler with a fiery passion for his childish way of dealing with things when they get hard. i mean, B has had to give up everything and Ty .. not so much. i'm not going to lie, them being together is like a volcano of emotions that is bound to explode, but hey, at least they're happy. this story is basically everything i've ever wanted to read in a story and more. i'm so sad to see it end, i just want it to keep going and going.
I really don't know how to sum up how much I love this story. You literally included like every aspect of a story that I stay away from because it seems like nobody can ever write write and you did it so perfectly. I love it. :) And I'm not even sad to see it end just because of I feel like this is the perfect ending for them. It's so natural. :)
I absolutely, positively adore this ending. We all knew they'd end up together. They had been through so much that there was no way that they would stay apart. I can't wait for the epilogue.
It's official, Tyler has reached flipping douche bag territory to the point that I'm one sentence away from going insane on his ass. He's acting like a spoiled 16-year-old because apparently his social agenda comes before Trace and apparently B has to give up everything while he gives up nothing. To say B's education isn't important pissed me off, coming from a guy who left his kid alone with a flipping dog. Ty will more then likely be the one who wants to come home but B shouldn't let him until he proves he's there to stay and won't waltz in and out whenever he pleases.
oh gosh, i did not expect all that to happen. you know, throughout the story i didn't like tyler, at all. regardless of how nice he was and now that he does this, i dislike him even more. :/
I love how real this is. I really can't think of anything else to say at this point besides that you've done a fabulous job. As sad as I am to see this end, it's been great!
ohmygod TYLER PAUL SEGUIN. NO. I got very emotional reading this. I hope there's something going on with Segs, because he can't just leave her like that.