All I Want Is You - Comments

  • removedhergrace

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    I think that people will like B more when we know what happened to her. We just know that she had a troubled childhood, lost a baby, and abuses drugs. If there was some pivitol thing from her past that caused to her act this way, maybe more people would understand her actions now.
    May 26th, 2012 at 03:19pm
  • hockeychick37

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    im soo glad that they are keeping the baby!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
    May 26th, 2012 at 01:25pm
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    i actually LOVE this update! i'm actually a fan of B, i think she's very strong, and while she does seem rather obnoxious, it makes me want to keep reading more and see what happens to her. i'm sitting here hoping that everything will go fine for tyler and her, hahaha. nice update for sure!
    May 26th, 2012 at 01:07pm
  • hockeychick37

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    shes preggers!!!! but she cant get an abortion and adoption would be depressing...just saying...UPDATE SOON!!! and i LOVE reading in seggys POV...B's was getting a bit 2 much...it was nice getting the story from a different few...UPDATE SOON!!!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 11:30pm
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    Whoot! Fantastic update. I love how much Tyler is in love with B, even if she does get into these messes. Yea, pregancy has been done, but I've yet to read it in a context like this, so don't even worry about it "being done". Keep up the great updates!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 12:40pm
  • hockeychick37

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    hope she's alright!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
    May 18th, 2012 at 12:27pm
  • hockeychick37

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    that was really good!!! i loved seeing what kind of a person B can be not drunk out of her mind...and what Patrice said, well i thought that was pretty awesome, but then again i love him to death and think everything he says is awesome cuz hes the one guy that i totally looked up to so ya...this, in my opinion was your best chapter and definitely my favorite. UPDATE SOON!!!
    May 16th, 2012 at 10:54pm
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    Love it!! A sober B would be good to see though!! So we can really get to see her without all the drugs and alcohol! Don't know whether to be Team Tyler and Team Greg!!!
    May 15th, 2012 at 01:32am
  • hockeychick37

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    this is really good...but i think she gets drunk waaaay 2 much. u should at least have her sober for once so we can see what a non drunk B is like. but other than that this is really good! UPDATE SOON!!!
    May 14th, 2012 at 10:46pm
  • removedhergrace

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    Realy good update! I liked it. I'd love to see more of B's family, or at least an explanation of what she did to end up this way. I think it would put it in a better context.

    Also, what's going on with her a Soupy? Hmm...love triangle?
    May 14th, 2012 at 12:39pm
  • saintsbecomesailors

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    I really like this story but B's character is soooo irritating, she stops me from living it, I'm totally team Greg!
    May 14th, 2012 at 11:10am
  • daydreamer2006

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    So, I think I'm becoming Team Greg... If there even is one haha. I really liked the update, can't wait for another :)
    May 14th, 2012 at 04:58am
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    Whoo hoo!!! I was so happy to see that you updated hon. I can see why this might not be your favorite, who likes writing filler? But to set up for the All-Star weekend, I think it was a good idea. Liked it, even though it's filler. I'd like to see Tyler with her more so we can really see their relationship, now that the substances are currently out of the picture.

    Keep it up!
    May 7th, 2012 at 02:31am
  • removedhergrace

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    Oh gosh. Okay, I love this. A lot. It's intense without being too over the top angsty, and it's a format I've never read previously. I think it has fantastic potential, and don't have any worries about just jumping in without the back story. Stories are better when you have to really figure out what's happening and pay attention. They get you more involved. Bravo so far.
    May 5th, 2012 at 06:49pm
  • hockeygirl11

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    this is great i would have never thought of this. csn't wait for the next update. i really want to know how this works.
    May 5th, 2012 at 03:51pm
  • hockeychick37

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    this had a great start!!! cant wait for more!!!
    May 5th, 2012 at 02:39pm