All I Want Is You - Comments

This was phenomenal. Just like the rest of the story, it's completely realistic. I can't wait for the rest!

Love this story! You're an amazing writer!

This is an amazing story, I love it! Update soon!

I loved getting Tyler's point of view on things...and the internal war about taking the painkillers. You're doing a great job!

I've seriously been reading this all day and it just gives me so many emotions. I'm only on part 13 at the moment but I swear I can't hold it in anymore. I freaking love this. I usually hate stories with drugs in them but you write this so well. I love the characters and the development. I love your writing style and just everything about this story. It's definitely my favorite at the moment. I can't wait to finish these last 3 parts and then spend every waking moment waiting for you to update! LOL. :D

I've seriously been reading this all day and it just gives me so many emotions. I'm only on part 13 at the moment but I swear I can't hold it in anymore. I freaking love this. I usually hate stories with drugs in them but you write this so well. I love the characters and the development. I love your writing style and just everything about this story. It's definitely my favorite at the moment. I can't wait to finish these last 3 parts and then spend every waking moment waiting for you to update! LOL. :D

i actually LOLed at the part when tyler said "swaggy."
but nooo, this chapter wasn't lame at all! i really enjoyed reading about their parenting habits and seeing how they're adapting to the new life. i hope B nor Tyler messes up, by drugs or cheating! updatesss :)

they are such great parents! i hope that b doesnt screw it up by going back to drugs...update soon!!!

they are such great parents! i hope that b doesnt screw it up by going back to drugs...update soon!!!

OH. MY. GOSH! Seriously teared up! They are such precious parents!! And Trace sounds PERFECT!!! Loved this chapter!

now im kinda terrified to have kids...lol. this was such an AMAZING chapter and once again, i love the sense of realness u got going...this story just blows my mind with the way that you write it...loved the ending and i hope tyler and b are good parents and that b does not turn back to drugs...update soon!!!

This is a fantastic chapter. Absolutely wonderful. You have a lovely writing style. Can't wait to read more
updates in whatever direction you decide to take. Can involve B's mom being hit by a bus?

I absolutely loved this chapter. I didn't have any expectations per say , but I feel like if I had, this would have exceeded them all. I'm really excited that we get to see how B and Ty handle being parents. I think I'm looking forward to them being cutesy with the baby (I mean, there has to be cutesy stuff, right?) and seeing if B and Ty fall back into any bad habits despite the baby.

This is so cute! I love these two and Tyler was so touching! God, I can almost imagine how adorable the baby is. I'm so glad you're continuing this story, maybe you could show some of Trace as a baby and then flash forward to one of him as a toddler. Now I just need to get off my chest that B's mom made me want to scream at her. I knew something was up the minute I read that she was talking to a couple. Update soon!

I'd love to see what happens after they have the baby. How do the cope? Does B go back to using??

I'd love to see some chapters after the baby. You could space them out by years, like a flashforward into their life/years/months with their son.

this story is soo real...like realer than any of the other stories on here. u really do a great job breaking down the characters, writing out an original story line, and putting everything 2gether so its makes sense. and that is why i love this story...its so real and u make it sooo easy to understand the characters and what they are going through. you elaborate on their problems but not so much where it gets boring and this story is just so amazing. update soon!

I think you should do some chapters after the baby's born or even an epilogue. I would love to see Tyler deal with the fact he needs to leave his party boy lifestyle behind and stay with his son and maybe try to prevent B going back on drugs. And that might involve him giving up any drugs he doesn't specifically need so they both vow to stay clean for the baby( because B says he's popping pills like candy, which makes me think he has a mild addiction, correct me if I'm wrong).But, God, Kieran totally has a complex of 'why me.' He's surely ignorant with the fact that listening to B's mother and giving up the baby is just going to make things worse for everyone. Hopefully he comes around, though I won't count on it. Update soon!

I definitely think that you should include a few chapters about how B and Ty do with being parents and how B deals with not using again. I know how you feel about getting bored though, although I'm not really bored with mine...just kinda stuck. Writer's block sucks.

But anyway...can't wait for more! :-)

Unique story line...can't wait to see what you have in store for them