Just An Old Flame - Comments

I love this! And what made it even more fantastic is that Hippos are my favorite animals too! lol but keep up the great work!

Great update. I love how cute Jan and Jon are.

So glad Jan is going to be ok. Great update!

Sorry about your accident! I hope you're alright!

Poor Jan. But I feel worse for Marian and Jana, they probably feel its their fault. But at least the family is getting closer!

I'm sorry to hear about your accident! I hope you start feeling better!
Poor Jan! :( But yay for Mel and Jon getting closer!

I am sorry to hear that you were in an accident, I do hope you are okay! I just want to tell you that I think this story is fabulous! There isn't anything like it - which is nice - and your writing just makes it so much better. I was having a party for Jon, finally he was going to get some, hahah. I am excited and nervous and completely shaking at the idea of reading the next chapter :)

I am so sorry to hear about your accident - hope you are doing better.

I hope Janny is ok - it can be very scary when a little one is sick. And as for Jon and Mel - no I dont think it is too quick - it is amazing how a little bit of alcohol can lower those inhibitions!! And believe me if I had Jon sitting across the table from me, it sure wouldnt take much alcohol to have me jumpin his bones!!!

Ahhh what wrong with lil Jan? Cant wait to read what you have planned next.

*GASP!!!!!!!!* it better just be a cold!! But good update :)

Thanks for the update. I hope you are doing okay and feeling better. I hope Jan is okay too. What happened?

Love the story! It's so cute!! Update soon!!!!

Aaahh! I'm not a hawks fan but towes is my weakness! So cute!

I love this story! Its so adorable!

I am so glad that they have decided to try and make their relationship a true family. I will be very interested in their date later in the evening!

Aweseom story. Jon as a dad would be so cute. I hope they get back together.

love it

I'm glad that he is stepping up to the plate it's so sweet how much he still cares for her

Nothing melts a cynic's heart faster than a cute kid in love with his equally cute "papa". Yes there are going to be haters, but I think as long as Mel stays away from the internet for a little while, things will start to blow over.

Now she just has to understand the feelings that she is having for Jon!!

I agree with bublbabie - Jon definitely has Mel engraved in his memory. She obviously meant a lot to him - and dare I say, still does!!
But actions speak louder than words...Jon is going to have to step up to the plate where Mel and Janny are concerned. He has shown that he can "talk the talk" but now he has to prove that he can "walk the walk".
It is a start, but he is no where near finished!

she should definitely make him work for it but not too hard because any man that can remember that much after 4 years definitely deserves a chance because obviously he still loves her. I can't wait for the next chapter