Blight - Comments

This is amazing! I love the imagery and the sensory details you put into this. It is amazing!

I think this story is the first original story I've ever read, and I'm so glad this was the first. I love how descriptive you are. You tell us everything you're seeing and some people don't do that. I'm definitely growing a soft spot for Micah.

I'm definitely subscribing. And I can't wait for more!

Thank you guys so much! I really do appreciate it!!! <3

Oh. My. GOD! This story is amazing!! It's a really really unique idea, I haven't read anything like this on Mibba before! The idea kind of reminds me of 'Shade's Children' by Garth Nix the whole, chasing and catching thing, anyway. This is really really awesome though, and the detail you put into your description of the characters and the setting are brilliant and make the whole thing really easy to picture! :)

Wow, I'm genuinely impressed! This is quite possibly the most unique story I've ever read on here! At first I was skeptical because I'm not usually into this genre of stories, but you drew me right in. You are definitely a brilliant writer, and this reads as though it is a professional, published book. Seriously, good job! I really enjoy the characters and the names and everything. Plus, with the imagery you use its like I'm not sitting in a room anymore, but I'm actually transported right into your story. Keep up the good work!(:

Definitely just subscribed! Loved it! I absolutely loved it. I can't even think of anything else to say but oh my gosh. You're an incredible writer, and I absolutely adore your layout!

Wow, this story is really interesting. I can't wait to read more! It's extremely well written and unique. I son't remember ever reading anything like it, so it doesn't seem.. old, or anything. I think I am going to subscribe to this. I cpuld picture the things you mentioned. I love it. <3

"Being captured was not in my list of ‘things to do’ today." I was like, oh wow, first line and already it's brilliant.

Your descriptive techniques are beautiful. I could picture the settings (particularly the forest in the first chapter) and the characters really well.

I've only read the first chapter so far but I'm going to subscribe. Expect more comments from me because I freaking love this story. Also, really good capturing with the poverty stuff, "posing her ribs beneath her small white tank top. Her knobby knees were dirty from her long day of gardening at the Commons.." It didn't make me feel sick, it made me feel really sympathetic for her.

This is extremely well written! The first chapter was a bit long for my taste but it stayed focused really well and didn't hold too much information which was great. The dialogue and interactions between Lana and Micah really showed you more about their personalities which was really interesting to read. I think you've got a great story in the works and I'm curious to see about the other characters and where you're going with this.

I really loved reading this so far. You're a great writer, I love the descriptiveness because it's just enough, some people are too wordy but you certainly aren't. I love the layout too and the pictures in the beginning, they added a nice touch to the story without being distracting. I really can't wait to read more. I am definitely recommending this and subscribing to it as well.

Your descriptive vocabulary is really very brilliant, I wish mine was as good. Subscribing to this and I want to read until the end. The beginning is really exciting and I like how you just get into the action straight away. Really well written and just brill, really, well done. :3

Thank you! I will fix it!

I really like the layout. The picture is gorgeous. I also really like the pictures you put in at the beginning of each chapter.

The beginning is exciting and it's an excellent way to pull in readers. It worked on me. Although, in your lines I need food and my family does too. I know they are relying on me I can see some verb tense confusion. It should be I needed food and my family did too. I knew they were relying on me to match the rest of the story since it's all in past tense.

I adore the world you've created here, with the different people having their unique powers and such. The words you use to describe this world are also lovely. It seems very well thought out.

I hope you do finish this one, because I'm subscribing and I would love to read this to the end.

I'm glad mibba put in this comment swap thing, it gives us a chance to read stories we would have never even thought about reading. Your story automatically interested me and I'd love to keep reading it. I hope you continue this story and I hope it continues to get more interesting! I think you're doing a great job for your first stab and completing a story. Keep writing even when you get moments of writers block, you have potential :) I can't wait for more, keep updating and I hope a lot of people will read and give you positive feedback on your writing. I usually read fan fictions, so yours is the first original I'm trying out so I'm quite excited to see what's coming! :)

WOW!!! That's really all I'm able to say at this point. I love this story! PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!!
By the way you did a fabulous job of describing Micah! He sounds divine! Who picture did you put up as him?

Thanks doll <3

This is really well written. It's really good! Good job :)

Thank you so much!!!

I really love the way you plunge into an exciting part right at the beginning. It really pulls the reader in. Good work :D

I really love the way you plunge into an exciting part right at the beginning. It really pulls the reader in. Good work :D