I know I am so behind in getting to read this, but I really enjoy the "flashbacks" and the 3rd Person POV chapters a lot. I learn a lot and makes me understand Ashlynn more.
I just started reading and I'm hooked! I wish I was good at writing action! You have set up such a great story so far. Only on chapter 6, but I'm gonna keep reading and commenting!!
I really like your dialogue and then humor! Bane and Stark are funny together.
So it's been awhile judging by the comments but I just wanted to stop in and say that I read the majority of this through the night and just finished it this morning and I loved it the whole way through.
It was a wonderfully written story and one of the better ones i've read on Mibba so keep up the good work!!
I LOVED this... Definitely my new favorite Captain America story on Mibba! It was expertly written and, despite a few grammar errors and understandable typos, flawless! (: I'm about to read your other stories, I just finished this one and can't wait for more!!
Awww!!! Freqking good ending for this. I guess all there is left to say for this story is: THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND SHARING YOUR STORY! It was awesome and I can't wait to read your Thor and your Loki story!
Awww!!! Freqking good ending for this. I guess all there is left to say for this story is: THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND SHARING YOUR STORY! It was awesome and I can't wait to read your Thor and your Loki story!
What is it with Tony and Shwarma? xD and I wonder if Loki will ever get that drink. I think they all could use one... And some Shwarma.... xD another really good battle scene, both you say? I'm looking forward to that and I can't wait to see how this will end.
So I don't know what happened, but I didn't get my subscription e-mail for this update. Anyways, I loved the update and I don't want this story to end. I am looking forward to reading some of your other stories though. Keep up the good work. :-)
Muahahaha! Vengeance! I was wondering if you would actually change the end a little and have them clean up Manhattan after the attack. So the politicians can shut up and not trash the saviors of the human race. cc: <3
Okay, so I have read this whole story and never got a chance to comment it; I was either on the Wii (damn gaming system of death) or my goldfish-esque attention span was acting up. Anyways, this may be one of the best stories I have ever read on this site; definetely had a lot of fun reading it. You are an extremely amazing writer. Well done, ma'am.