I like this, although I've only really read the first chapter or two. The one thing I will say is that you should try to remember to put spacing between each paragraph so it's easier to read, flows better, etc. You had a few grammar mistakes that I noticed, as well as spelling errors, but nothing too major that made it unbearable to read or anything. Good job so far!
However, I do think you should give your story a one-over before you submit. There are some mixed up words and minor grammar errors :] The way your write Steve makes my heart melt.
Hey! I just wanted to say that even though I've ever seen the movie or any of the supplemental movies of the heroes I love your story. You do a great job explaining the characters and who they are, especially to a girl that's clueless about them. Your right is good too, but the only thing I'm confused about is the tesseract thing they're looking for. Could you please explain it to me? Or if you're saving those details for a later chapter (I'm only on 6) then dont tell me! Keep up the good work!
This is just so sweet and romantic! I'm really glad that comment swap led me here. I like Ash's chemistry with the rest of the Avengers, it makes it really funny - and I don't say that often. The only thing I think you should fix is that there needs to be a space between your paragraphs...
Like this. Sometimes it would get hard to read because there wasn't that space. But I'm sure if you fixed that, which as an easy but still agonizingly painfully long to do, it should be fine. I didn't spot too many grammar or spelling mistakes. I really enjoyed this! You have no idea how happy I am that Ash and Steve finally kissed! There are just so many times when they should've done it, but like Steve said, they, “... are the dumbest, most romantically inept people I have ever met.” I can't wait to see what happens next! :)