Insomnia sucks... I feel a little sorry for you. Anyways another good, well written, well thought out chapter from you. Loving the facts at the bottom of chapters. The last fact about insomnia was also a bit bad ass reminder like thing - if that makes any sense at all. Looking forward to even more.
I have only read the first couple of chapters, but this is a great idea and very good writing. Sure, there are the usual little mistakes, but in my opinion those are allowed in a community like this. You have the ability in this story to draw in the readers and you explain things very well. While Marvel fics aren't my thing, I enjoyed what I read.
I never know what to say in comments for this... It's awesome and well written. No doubt about that, but other than that I have no clue what to write besides: hoping for more soon