Two Worlds Collide - Comments

I am so sad this is over. I'm very new to reading it, but I read it in like a day.

I was so surprised when I got notifications that this had been updated. But a good surprised. And then I realized this is now over and I'm so sad! It was a perfect ending though. Thank you for this story

It's over. I'm happy and sad all at the same time. I'll miss there mishaps and shenanigans as well but, I can always re read it lol thank you for writing a wonderful story. OH I agree with your boyfriend!

Love it, great ending can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, I loved how Gabe stood up against Kathy bitch deserved it and when she couldn't take no for an answer Melanie had to step in and put tht bitch's mind straight, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

You have no idea how FUHRIGGEN EXCITED I was to see this had been updated. And it was fabulous! <3

Oh my god, I've been waiting for an update for what feels like an eternity, I think I might have lost all hope along the way but whoa, thank you for this amazing chapter. I had a smile on my face the whole time!
I don't want it to end either, really. I don't read a lot of fanfictions but I love yours so much. :)

I'm so happy that you updated this story! I have missed it a lot. Mel and Gabe are just so cute and they still bring out the best in each other! Can't wait to see what happens next! ♥♥♥

I have never understood what people meant when they said, "I want to punch myself in the face right now" up until this moment. I have never wanted to punch myself so hard in the face in my whole entire life. This was just absolutely adorable. I think what I love the most is the character progression and the plot line. I love how you can totally connect with each character and I just can't express the feelings that are overcoming me. I love the fact that you kept Mel's innocence throughout the whole story and I love how you evolved Gabe throughout. It was just so beautiful to see everything come together. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story about how love will always conquer and about how people can change. I'm just so overcome with feelings, please excuse me while I cry for a lifetime. /sobbing

You know something funny? A while ago, I think during the middle of this story, I was trying to think of something that had happened between him and his ex that would make him so bitter, and one thing that came to my mind was finding out she terminated a pregnancy. I don't even know why I thought of it, but how crazy that I did. I can't even imagine how horrible that would make him feel. As for this chapter, so perfect! Her first time speaking and she says Gabe's name? That is precious. And when they say they love each other at the end of the chapter? I HAVE BEEN WAITING. WAITING. WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT AND NOW IT'S HERE AND I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO BECAUSE I DON'T WANT THIS TO BE OVER. NO.

Also, no need to thank me! It has been a pleasure to tag along for the ride <3

UGH SO BEAUTIFUL. I love that he begs her not to leave him just as she's likely thinking he'd give up on her. This is so incredibly well written and probably one of the most beautiful chapters I've ever read. And the abortion broke my heart, Gabe always talks about how much he loves and wants kids :( he and Melanie will have beautiful children together.

So that's the story behind Gabe and his ex girlfriend, wow she is a bitch for aborting his baby and even if he didnt notice the signs she should have at least told him u kno but I am glad tht Gabe and Melanie confessed their love to each other can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Short comment as I'm just in the middle of getting ready for work, but I am so, so sorry for Melanie. Please update soon c:

so it is Monday and I have waited long enough... I cant take it anyrmoe.... I need my fix lol!!!! I cant wait to find out what happens next

Yaya!!! Update!!! Love it

I seriously puffed up like a proud mama when Gabe told her to shut up. I am so proud of him for taking it into his hands and using his connections to find her real mom. I can't believe she'd be so ignorant though and talk about Melanie's dad the way she did, and then assume that she just wanted money. And then a breath later she's calling Mel her 'baby'? Um...sorry, but didn't she leave her and not bother to look back? Way to be a hypocrite, you bag. She'd better not upset Melanie when she meets her, or let me TELL you sum'mm *finger snap* And I can't wait for Gabe's back story! LOVE THIS <3

Oh my God when he told Melanie' mom to shut up hahaha I died!! Ugh please update soon i want to read more!!

Sweet mother of God, Gabe u found her mom!!! Man oh man Gabe u have a shit load to explain before u get to the hospital but I'm soo happy tht Gabe found her u kno, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh god... I don't know how Gabe could even stand to hear about all the stuff that was wrong with Melanie and see her in the hospital bed without breaking down. I feel so stupid right now, sitting on my laptop in my room, crying as I'm typing this. I absolutely love the fact that Tori yelled at Gabe. Someone needed to do it, and I'm glad that it was her, because she has so much substance that shows through her actions, but it was nice for it to show through her words for once. I think Gabe kind of realized that he was being extremely stupid at that point. He needed a wake-up call. It never occurred to me that Melanie was looking for the wrong name. The only thing that confused me about Melanie's search for her mother was that she just automatically thought that since they had reached the last Jennifer Adams in New York, that it had to be her. Her mom could have easily moved without any notice or something like that, and I'm pretty sure her dad would have been notified if she had died. I'm just glad that Gabe is going to do something for Mel while she's like this. I think it would be cool to see Melanie's thoughts right now, while she's unconscious and the first time she wakes up. Just to see how her view is on everything, and if she remembers what happened, or even if she remembers anything at all. Oh god, I hope she remembers everything and doesn't have amnesia. I don't know if I could handle it. I feel like I would completely break down crying and bawling hysterically, yelling at my computer. So... Unless you want that to happen, I recommend no amnesia. I'm crossing my fingers that Gabe finds Melanie's real mother though. I think that would be the best gift he could give her right now. Wow. This was a good chapter. I loved it, like always. Thanks for updating. As you probably already know, I love you and this story to pieces. So thank you so much for writing this. I don't think I can ever thank you enough for writing this. Again, thanks for updating. I always enjoy leaving unnecessarily long and detailed comments on this story.

OH MELANIE. Poor, poor girl. She lost her mom (or so she thought) and then she almost lost her life. I can't even imagine how awful she must look, or how Gabe must have felt when he learned about the accident. That is a conversation that I would have loved to read. And now I can't stop thinking about the fact that she lost her hair, and with the skin grafting on her skull it might not grow back, and her voice. Holy cow. But I hope Gabe can find her real mom! LOVE THIS <3