Folie à Deux - Comments

Right from the begging this story put me through a roller coaster of emotions and I loved every moment of it. The story plot and theme was unique and it was definitely a great read ! From the drama in the beginning to the happiness in the ending it was a great show of how their relationship works. Not every relationship has to be perfect and the dynamics of this was well formed and I appreciated every word.

I'm here (finally!) judging the entries for my An Album of inspiration contest!

Layout and Summary

The layout is easy to read and simplistic -- just lovely. I absolutely adore the background pattern, it's just beautiful! Your summary is really short and incites this sense of mystery, especially with it just being the definition. It's such an unusual definition that it does just make me want to read on.

Content

Anyone who knew Pete Wentz would easily say he was a great catch. AMEN. No more reading needed, this is perfect. Moving on and being serious though. I love how you interweave this idea of the madness of two right from the very beginning. The way that their relationship did / does function does seem to give off this air of being completely unusual and slightly mad in a sense, and the fact that it seems to be both and not just one is just a wonderful way of interweaving the album in right from the get-go.

I get the idea that this is just a really toxic relationship. Both seem to be too engrossed in one another to realise that what they are doing is really self-destructive and dangerous. It almost seems as if they both absolutely don't trust one another and that's definitely something that I think will cause problems in the future.

As I read further and further on, it seems to get more and more as if they are a little too alike to work together, y'know? I know I can't stand people who are as stubborn as me, never mind date someone like that, so I can imagine that has a lot to do with the way that the two argue and worry.

I'm glad that turned into a happy ending, though! It's a shame that it took such drastic action for it to end up that way, but it really was interesting to read through how they worked through the entire ordeal together. I guess the relationship really is the shared madness of two, because it certainly seemed mad!

Concrit

She felt nauseas -- I think that should be nauseous at the end there. That was all I caught though!

Overall

This was really good. Different to everything I've read before in terms of the album being converted into a fic. Awesome job!

Omg this was super cute agh loveeeeeee

I absolutely love the layout! How do you get that font? As for the actual story.. BRILLIANT. I didn't read the whole thing because romance isn't my type but that description WOW. You seem to have an eye for detail in your writing and layout, anyone can see that. Great job, keep up the good work!

Absolutely amazing story

Comment swap!

Since I'm on mobile, I can't comment on the layout, but the story was great! The intoxication theme worked so well with the story. It's a easy to read without being overly-simplistic. I'm going to come back and finish it up later.
Keep writing! :)

I lovedddd the ending!! Happy endings! Audorable! Fantastic job. Short,simply and Sweeet!

First of all, I LOVE the layout! I like to see how others are creative and each one is unique. =)
I have just finnished reading the first chapter and im not planning on stopping till i finnish it all! Promise! So you will see another comment once i finnish your story!
I enjoy reading these sort of stories because each person who writes them has a different approch. I cant wait to finnish reading the story and see what the outcome is going to be!

awww! that was a great was to end it.

Aww! That was freaking sweet!!! I loved it :)

I forgot about this story, I missed it. maybe you can make another pete story when this ends?

I wonder how this'll end, though, I will be sad, this is so good

ahh love this still :)) sorry I haven't commented, I accidentally turned off my email notification for stories D:

She's so sad but she doesn't see it.

I can't wait to see how they end up

I'm glad you updated. I'm looking forward to see how you end this so update soon! :)

So adorable!

Aww, that's so sweet

Such a good story :).

So comment swap brought me to this and I'm so glad it did...First of all, when I saw it was a Pete Wentz fic, I was hooked, but I really loved the way you made the whole situation between them genuine and realistic, and it didn't just feel like a teenage girl trying to live out her fantasy with her favourite rock star or something which I think a lot of fan fiction tends to do. And portraying him as a difficult and less likeable character is a difficult decision to make, but I thought it was really how interesting how you’ve turned him into a bad character. I just loved how you described their first fight, it was so intense, and the dialogue was amazingly realistic! You really show what your characters’ personalities are without telling so much, especially in how they interact with each other. It confused me a bit at one point when you switched narrative perspective suddenly, at the end of chapter 4 when Mia suddenly referred to herself as ‘I’—don’t know if that was deliberate or not. The developing motif of the couch and all the waiting though is really powerful, and I like how you started the chapters with the same thing—the repetition said a lot about their relationship. I’ve just adored reading this so far!