June 15th, 2012 at 08:11pm
Aww, this story is really, really sweet. :3
I thought there was gonna be drama once Mia returned home and he'd actually have someone else there, but...it's really just adorable how they still work together so well even with their few problems. This is really nicely written. :3
Your writing style fits very nicely with the mood of the story, and I really like how you've characterized Mia. Their relationship is very intricate (for lack of a better word), but also very dynamic and 'right'.
I really enjoyed reading and I hope to read more in the future! <3