Painting Flowers. - Comments

@ firearnok
Oh haha. XD Well no problem. A few years definitely does wonders for one's writing voice, happy story telling! No matter which one it is. :)

@ SoberBunny
Omg wow i didn't even know mibba was still active haha!
It's nice that you succeeded going through a chapter or wherever you stopped haha, and i'm glad you see good sides to this story but omg let's be honest, the writing couldn't be worse haha.
I think I wrote it 3 or 4 years ago and i still have the whole plotline somewhere on my old computer but you said it yourself, i started writing it with little to no experience in writing and it is really really timeliney haha.
I have improved a lot and my stories don't feel like they're made out of filler chapter anymore thank god haha.

Thank you, i honestly don't know if i'll ever get back to it, i'd need to rewrite everything to make it less ridiculous hah, but thanks!

Hello, got this from comment swap. :) I have to say I absolutely love the idea, though knowing myself I'd probably flip out if sober me went back in time to have a chit chat with drunken me, haha. The sarcasm is fantastic, "curse words were like, seventy percent of my vocabulary" and the such helped a lot with the character development. How he thinks and why he acts the way he does. I do have one tiny critique though, and that's sometimes the story feels a little timeliney, like an outline. And then I did this, and then he did that, and then, and then, and then... So maybe to help with that add a little bit of detail? Flesh out your settings maybe, describe scents, sights, smells, etc. Make the reader feel as though they are going on this journey with Gerard, rather than kind of watching him stumble through it from afar. Other than that I think it's a great piece and when college slows down you oughta update. :)

@ xocreature
i promise i will, i'm just really busy with college ;-;
i'm really glad you like it, though, since i'm not all that proud of it c: comments like this one make me want to get back onto writing ^^

Are you still going to write this? Because I honestly think it's really really good! If you write even just like, a filler chapter, I'd be so hAppy!

Hi, first of all I really like the title. I was totally expecting something else, but when I saw the cover, I was like: I am totally going to love this! Then, after reading the prologue, the title totally fits. I really enjoyed reading this because you're writing is amazing! In chapter 2, the writing was so vivid, almost as if I were silently watching this happening right in front of me. Some parts were amusing, others were painstaking.

Hey, got this on comment swap and I wasn't extremly interested In a fanfiction especially a MCR one since I'm not a bug fan but this is a great story, imaginative, unique and well written :) also from reading some comments people are loving this, so keep up the good work!

@ mi_sangre
oh wow really? that's kind of awesome!
ok so i'm getting on it! :D writing this story kinda feels right again ^^

well thats good news ;-) where do i need to go to help with the dishes? i'm just 7km away from the border to france ;-)
take ur time, but good to hear there will be something in the future :D

@ mi_sangre
I totally want to fucking continue it haha, i'm just so stuck.. like, every single detail is planned out but i don't know how to make it a good read, you know? I'll try to get back on writing the next chapter when i'm done with the dishes haha!

just found this story ... is there any chance to get you back on it?

@ xocreature
yessss!! hIIIII!! aw i'm sO GLAD you like it that much!!
and i'm having a baaaaad writers block with this story omfgg, i got 1000 words down for the next chapter and i just don't know how to phrase what's going to happen, sigghhhh.
i just hope people hang on until i get over it !

I Monsterrayy from Wattpad (remember me? ;D) and I am IN LOOOOVE with this story! Can't wait for the update!!

@ Lady-Sorrows
I will update it sooner or later, I promise, I will (hopefully) graduate mid-june and then I'll have plenty of time for my frerards :D

I love this story please keep going!!!

BRO IT WONT WORK ON MY IPOD SO I USE MY PARENTS IPAD, ITS SO HARD TO TAKE 7 SECONDS TO DELETE HISTORY

@ Fanfic_Addict
aghhh i'm tryyyiiing! (i'm tryyyiiing to let you knooow how much you meaaan ♪)
i'm kind of stuck in the chapter i'm so sorry. but i will update i promise, i'm not letting this story down :)

UPDATE!!!! PLEASEEE!!!!!!!!!!

@ KellyIero
KELLYYYYYY <3

Hi! I'm here from comment swap. I'm not really a MCR fan so I thought I wasn't going to like this fanfic but I was wrong. It's really incredibly written and unique.its not really my cup of tea since I'm not into MCR but its still super duper awesome. Great job!