Painting Flowers. - Comments

I come from comment swap and I am in love. This is truly original and one of a kind. You're writing a gem here but I do suggest spacing out your paragraphs a bit more. I'm recommending and subscribing.

When I first saw the title of the story, I thought it was going to be an All Time Low one (They have a song called Painting Flowers).

I found it a little hard to read your chapters. I think it may have been the size and font of your writing as well as there not being any spaces between paragraphs (I know books have them, but on Mibba it's a lot easier to read when there are spaces).

Good luck on the rest!

ahh, i cannot wait for frank to come into the picture. :D
oh, and here's a tip: you should try putting a space between your paragrahphs, it'll make it easier to read. ^_^ i'm excited for the next chapter.

shitt, i'll be the first to comment. ^_^
i like the idea of your story.
you should definitely continue. :)