Painting Flowers. - Comments

This is great <3 please update soon :)

First of all, I know it seems like such a stupid thing to comment on, but I absolutely love your layout; it's much better than any layout I've ever made for a story so I find it really cool x)

I am a really big fan of MCR and I always love a good Frerard, so I have no complaints about that, however I think you should work on your paragraphs a little more.

For instance, this:

"You might want to invite Mrs. Francis for a coffee this noon, Mr. Way," Matt said.
I sighed heavily. Matt was a really good person, and he really helped me succeed in selling and promoting my art, but meeting this Francis lady again wasn't in any of my plans in this life. Neither in my next life. Or the next. Well you get the idea.

Should look like this:

"You might want to invite Mrs. Francis for a coffee this afternoon, Mr. Way," Matt said.

I sighed heavily. Matt was a really good person, and he really helped me succeed in selling and promoting my art, but meeting this Francis lady again wasn't in any of my plans in this life. Neither in my next life. Or the next. Well, you get the idea.

Other than that, I really have no complaints and love this story. I am indeed subscribing. :D

I love it! It's super cute and sooo interesting!

this is so different than other frerards, I LOVE IT! the plot is ACTUALLY existent, instead of just being sex! :D

I love this, it's a really good idea and it's really well written:3

I like love this so cute

Oh man I just fell in love with this story. Its so amazing (:
I can't wait for whats in store and the older Gerard should just say he's married and straight and repel Frank just so his younger self could have him (:
Its sad he doesn't remember Frank :C
That was interesting reading Gerard/Gerard x)

I hope you update soon!

*Subscribes*

I shouldn't have been reading this in the same room as my parents, because I started giggling like mad at the Gerard/Gerard part.

amazing

UPDATE NOW OR I'LL EAT YOUR PENISGUN!!! and don't complain to me about late dawns, okay it's not my fault, i'm just not inspired so i'm not gonna write stuff that's shit.

But I suck at writing.......and drawing.

BY THE WAY I DREW YOU A PICTURE ON INSTAGRAM

Awww,well,sucks huh? X3

Ohkay I'm going to comment on here-anywhore your welcome,and I seriously mean it.fucking update

PENISGUN THIS IS THE MOST PERFECT THING EVER OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!

ohai penisgun i'm just here to read this because you're my penisgun and i have to support you.... PLEASE CHANGE YOUR THEME OMG IT'S TOO SKINNY, I LIKE MY THEMES LIKE I LIKE FRANK, FATTTTTT... and now on to read.

Ehmagawd itz uhmazing

Sorry, Chapter one;
He had moved from New Jersey to Michigan, in a city called Flushing because it looked calm, but mostly because he thought the name of the city sounded funny.

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I live 15-30 minutes away from Flushing, Mighigan. Just wanted to point that out. xD

Comment swap brought me here. I'm a huge My Chemical Romance fan and I thought this story was really good. The chapter was a bit long but I still enjoyed reading it. I'm not a huge fan of Frerard either but I'm going to continue to read this. I'll recommend it and subsribe to it. <3

Comment swap brought me here. I'm a big My Chemical Romance fan. Die hard. I think the chapters are really long, it's okay for a long chapter, but I'd break it up and take the unnecessary parts out. The storyline is, interesting, a bit confusing. I think you have a good story, but not all that original. I know it can be hard trying to make something that's not real, original and your own. Good luck with this story. :)