Shaded Beauty - Comments

holy crap this is great! i wish the update wasn't so far awayyy :(

Found this tonight. Officially in love. Please update soon!

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I think everyone who reads this story has to agree that you are a brilliant writer. Your style is beautiful, as are your descriptions.
This is a very easy story to get into and the characters are wonderful, with each personality showing through in your writing.

This is a great story and you're doing amazingly. Keep up the good work!

wow love this please update soon like nowish

The first chapter reminds me of my high school experience. Not the whole love thing, but the first sentence about reading the problem a hundred times and still not understanding... I was like "Yeah, been there, done that," haha. And being frustrated with people who didn't take it seriously.

But anyway, enough about me. I really like the premise of this story, it's one of the few I've come across that isn't a celeb story (not that I don't like those, it's just nice to have a change once in a while, you know?). The writing was good, and it was easy to get into. I saw no grammar and spelling errors, which I always like to see. Plus I love me a good love triangle.

Overall, very good job and continue! Good luck with the rest.

kk so I punched my wall. Here's the thing.. i'm weak and it's strong. sooooo my hand hurts. I loved this chapter but i'm gonna beat Lucas!

I love this story, please update regularly, it's really good and I don't want to unsubscribe :)

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So if the story is longer than like three chapters then I just plan on reading the first couple chapters then come back to finish, and even though yours was only five chapters long I decided to read the first two then come back, but this story was so well written that I couldn't bring myself to click the button that would take me away. You have a great start to this story, the characters are well thought out, no mistakes, as I saw, and all in all its a great start to what I'm sure is going to be an amazing story. I have subscribed and recommended and I can't wait for more!!!

Ohhhhhh I can tell this is going to be goooood. Update. ASAP. Soon. Please.

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This was so good your writing skill is great, I mean that. You have a great talent for it. I've read some student/teacher stuff before but this has to be one of my all time favourite. Keep writing because you're really good at it.

oh i meant i am* xD

oh i meant i am* xD

So, i was brought here by comment swap but i'm not totally in love with this story xD
I love the way you write honestly, you have a lot of talent. Your story is my first student/teacher romance so don't let me down :P lol just kidding.
Either way, good job! I happily await more!

ugh. Mibba is being a total bitch right now. I typed out one whole nice long comment for comment swap and then I turn a chapter and lose everything.

I seriously feel like just smacking this thing.

>.<

First of all, I'm not one to particularly like student teacher relationships unless they're very well written. I've never had hot teachers, see, so something about them always grossed me out.

I like this though. Shay seems like someone I can relate to easy, and I like that she's deadly smart. Colton though. Colton sounds hot. Lucas though. I'm not too sure about Lucas.

I'm sorry that this comment sucks. I really did have a nice one typed out before but alsfj aldsfj sldfj kj f I just can't bring myself to type it all up again.

You have no typos, honestly, and perfect grammar as far as I've read. Great work!

I never really read any teacher student relationship stories, because I never really liked the idea. However, after reading your story, I can say that I misjudged them. You give enough information and background that the story is interesting and not grody. I must agree with On My Sleeve about the POVs; it would easier and less confusing if you could somehow identify who talking.

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So, I enjoy reading the story. However, I don't one hundred percent like the way that it switches characters. It makes me have to keep up with the book more than I'd like. Maybe if each chapter had different POVs, then it would make for an easier read - but that's just me. Other than that, there was only a few grammatical errors that I saw. Great story. :D

Chapter 2:

I still prefer Lucas. XD I don't understand what it is about him though.

I'm getting addicted to this XD

You are my favorite author on here by now so far :) your really good i look foward to reading more of ur story:)

I was sent here by Comment Swap.

And let me just say, I'm so glad I was.

This story pulled me in right from the first paragraph.

I've fallen in love with Lucas' character already and I was sort of holding my breath waiting for them to kiss. They're perfect for each other. I can already see that. I should keep reading, and I will, don't worry. xD I just already love Lucas and I'm already rooting for him.

Your style is absolutely amazing. You may be one of my new favorite authors on here xD I'm subscribing as soon as I post this and I'm going to hop right in and read on. Excellent job :)

please update soon! I really love this and you know what? It's like I'm learning how to write a good story well by reading yours.
keep going <3