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    @ violetkarma
    thank you so much for your kind words :) they mean a lot
    February 25th, 2013 at 12:42am
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    You really are an amazing writer!!!!
    February 24th, 2013 at 10:59pm
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    Please write more! I'm getting addicted to this. You're an awesome writer :D
    February 20th, 2013 at 01:50pm
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    @ ShannonMarie
    Thanks. I hope to update. I brew all my ideas that I shared with a dear friend and trying to figure out what should come next. I hope to have the next one out soon.
    January 30th, 2013 at 05:01pm
  • ShannonMarie

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    I hope you update soon :)
    January 30th, 2013 at 08:20am
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    LOVE it so far! Please update soon!
    December 8th, 2012 at 06:49pm
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    @ ShannonMarie
    Thank you so much for your love :)
    November 14th, 2012 at 07:21am
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    this is my new favourite story :)
    November 14th, 2012 at 04:20am
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    @ The Last Dance.
    It does make you antisocial and I have a few friends that understand and see how important it is to me especially when they have the same class as I do haha so we study together. Thankfully those are the friends I could rely on to help me study and not distract me with talking
    November 1st, 2012 at 04:10pm
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    @ teenagedream91

    Being a bio major makes you antisocial and to me, its worth the ordeal. My friends dont understand that. They always ask me to hang out but the pile of homework and study guides are mostly important.
    November 1st, 2012 at 08:27am
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    @ The Last Dance.
    Exactly. You have to read it over and over again and remember everything that is in the book. There is just a lot of info to memorize and people always wince when I tell them I'm a bio major or they just say that I must be really smart haha it's just a lot of hard work and hittin the books.
    November 1st, 2012 at 06:51am
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    @ teenagedream91
    They all think its like read the chapter once and you will get it. Nope nope. I wish but nope.
    November 1st, 2012 at 12:15am
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    @ The Last Dance.
    thanks, it can be a bitch and it's really hardcore. no one can really understand unless they are in the same major or something similar to it.
    October 31st, 2012 at 06:06am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I feel you. Being a pre dental major, I know how you feel.
    October 31st, 2012 at 04:31am
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    @ The Last Dance.
    Thank you so much and no you didnt offend me at all. Just wanted to let you know this is one of my stories I am not abandoning. I love it far too much and created such a great foundation for it. I'm happy you want me to update but yeah I am busy since I'm in my final years as a bio major and we take hardcore math and science classes.
    October 30th, 2012 at 06:39pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    Early congratulation for your graduation and thanks for notifying me. If my comment seemed to offend you in any basis, I am sorry :) I didn't realize how busy you were.
    October 30th, 2012 at 05:48pm
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    @ The Last Dance.
    I am continuing this. I never gave this up. It just takes more time now since school is ending in a month and a half so everything is due. Thank you, I take much pride in my Thor story. It's honestly one of my favorite stories to write
    October 30th, 2012 at 03:39pm
  • The Last Dance.

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    I wish you continue this! There aren't more Thor's fan fictions out there but this is the best.
    October 30th, 2012 at 09:05am
  • insanely-unique

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    I have to say, there is not enough Thor fiction around. And you do an awesome job at describing him :) I love that he has no regard for doors, makes things a little humorous.
    Talen seems a likeable character, I enjoy the way you're developing her background in little snippets as opposed to an info dump on the readers. Every time you think you know her something new pops up. It's lovely to not be able to tell how the story will pan out.
    Looking forward to reading more :)
    August 27th, 2012 at 10:45am
  • Miss May

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    Popping over from comment swap. I haven't read a lot of Thor or Loki based Fan Fictions, to tell the truth, but I really am enjoying 'Gentle Heart'. Your description of the characters is spot on and I just love how you're describing Thor to a perfect T.
    You grammar and spelling are great, so no complaints there. I like that your layout is easy on the eyes.
    But I think most of all I am falling for your Talen, she sounds so lovely and relatable! Keep going!
    August 27th, 2012 at 02:16am