The comment swap sent me here and I am so glad! This is wonderful! I can't wait to see what happens next! The summer and prologue are wonderful. This story is extremely well written and thought out. I'll be subscribing because honestly I'm too smitten not too! Keep up the amazing work!
The comment swap sent me here and I am so glad! This is wonderful! I can't wait to see what happens next! The summer and prologue are wonderful. This story is extremely well written and thought out. I'll be subscribing because honestly I'm too smitten not too! Keep up the amazing work!
WOW! Just reading the summary made it seem intense. Very detailed and descriptive. I'm not really understanding it but that's probably because it's not what I usually read. But the way you describe things is amazing! I honestly wish my writing is as good as yours but we all can't be like each other we're all different. This whole thing flows and it's honestly perfect. Keep up the good work!
Oh my fucking God. Sorry for swearing but that's the kind of story I was looking for. Don't you dare give up on this story because I honestly love it to bits right from the start. Brilliant writing. I love the concept and your writing style is superb. Your flow and description use is near flawless and that's hard to find these days where both compliment each other so well. The dialogue flows very nice. I am intrigued to find out what happens with the characters and how they develop. The way you write can definitely captivate someone. I absolutely love the world you are creating. I really enjoyed reading this and I am quite excited waitng for more chapters. :)